Miss you Buddy...

We born in different states

Grew up somewhere indistinct states

These books bought us together

and that cafe with filter strips made us together..

Those beautiful nights in shady lamps

those bricks with stars and 

hands with rum, a fire in between

with a smoke in air..Oh!! how beautiful, those nights..

We laid together, we fought together,

Those flirty days and nights, where 

we backed those girls, indeed their fingers on us

ohh!! how beautiful they are....in memories now..

A place always for you, 

A glass and a puff everytime for you,

Many a time I will remind you,

A part of this man occupied by you...

A bye cannot take us away,

I wish this Bye now

Will make our bond strong...

A wish of luck from all my heart..

Gonna miss you buddy....

Words in hindi..:

Kise pata tha ki hum mile ek din

kise pata tha ki hum toote is din...

Yaad aate mujhe woh din hooghli pe

aur woh raat talab pe....

Woh raat mein humaari yaadein

uss kursi pe humari hasi...

Woh diwaaron ke beech mein apna talaash zindagi ka

khair mujhe nahi pata tha ki hum roote is din...

dekta hu kitna door jaayega mujhe chodke

kabi aanaa hi padega woh yaadon se

intezaar hai us din ka jab hum chatth pe baite

aur woh kahaani phir se yaad aaye..jaha

tu suit pehnke ho aur mera kitaab haath mein...

kehna toh padega jaffi dalke ki 

dost chal raha hai mera kuch paane...

aur mein intezaar kare apni wapasi ka wohi chatth pe...

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is a very relatable message. I like the way you include details from time spent together to show us how you'll miss this person. Even tho it's written for a friend, it could also apply to many other kinds of "good-byes" in life, whether a pet or a family member, etc. I like the way you are subtle with your details ("a glass & a puff") which gives readers room to interpret in different ways. I also admire that you can write in more than one language! Very impressive! (((HUGS)))

[Prashant Bajpai]

this one is really heart touching,, and the line our hands on rum it is so true brother

[Surya]

Haha, it is.....Thank you dear friend for your kind visit and words...:)

[Prashant Bajpai]

we be glad to read more from you. such are so influencing

[Surya]

Haha,..I will try my best to it....Thanks again...:)

[wordman]

we all have people we really miss ,we make friends and we lose them some how,but we can stay in touch

[Surya]

Yep,...Thank you Wordman...:)

[Psychotic Lily]

This is such a wonderful poem. it has reminded me of my friends that I miss dearly. I look forward to your next work!

[Surya]

I miss him tooo....Thank you so much Lily for your kind visit ...:)

[Mr.Writer]

A sweet, cute and beautiful poem on you and your buddy together...
The emotions mix from happy, to sad, to humor, and that really enhanced the poem!
Keep it up

[Surya]

Thank you Shaan...:)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Kind and needed words. I liked the use of the two languages. Words keep friendship and memory alive. Thank you Surya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Yeah they do..Thank you John..:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my dear friend.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I liked the English version better than the Hindi one. I feel you can tinker up a bit with the Hindi phrases here.. Nevertheless, a good theme, well penned :)

[Surya]

Yeah, I agree still learning to improve my linguistics in hindi...Thank you Yumna for your kind visit and words...:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Surya. A pleasure always :)

[Abhishek Asthana]

you wrote in twice and then too in different languages... so undoubtedly you deserve double appreciation for that... your best friend might be feeling vert lucky after going through this one...
great work surya

[Surya]

Thank you so much Abhishek...:)

[duff]

Having a smoke and drink while laughing the night away with a close friend. Times that won't be forgotten. A lighthearted trip into our past. A fun read Surya. Thanks for sharing:)

[Surya]

Thank you Duff for your kind visit and words...:)

[duff]

Anytime Surya!

[Anjali]

I really liked that you wrote a poem in English and Hindi, both! Both are beautiful, I liked them. Keep it up!

[Surya]

Thank you so much Anjali...:)

[Anjali]

You're welcome!