Photograph....

Striking thoughts....

New wavy morning holding Cups

Of memories enlightening Joyous eyes

Mouth open wide, Teeth twinkling white

Smiling in wanderlust of falling walls..

Shrugging and shedding leaves of spring

Glowing bright with dew drops on veins

Stems pulling me back from swing

Saying jump and fly on wings not on swings...

Moments squeezed where deck of cards 

Scattered, Hanging through invisible webs in 

Confused, violent grey air

Just a snap, all the beauty vanished away.

Day to night even in noon,

Cam needs a visionary eye,

I need a hand to click those 

Scattered moments in noon and night..

I sit their at night

Recall those fights 

Where I laid in pics

With beautiful kites...

Reviews

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

The imagery is a photo of perfection, and the strong emotions tie it all together to capture a picture perfect poem. Nice work surya, and sorry for the delay on the R.R.

[Nora]

The emotions are so pure, the idea is so great , the poem is pretty amazing

[Surya]

Thank you for your kind visit and words Nour_han...:)

[Nora]

You are welcome 😊😊

[barleygirl]

This is very brilliantly conceived & written. Reading this feels like the way it feels when you look at an old photograph & notice all these details that spark more memories from this time in one's life. It's like one memory spills from another, on & on. Your descriptive observations are both familiar & unique. Love the whimsical tone & approach (((HUGS)))

[Surya]

Thank you so much Margie for your kind visit and words....(((hugs)))

[CAPOLAVORO]

Silent yet the emotions are loud. Great write.

[Surya]

Ahh!!...Thank you so much my friend, glad to see you here again, Thank you for your visit and words...Have a great day...:)

[Hope]

Thanks for relaxing me.
While I am reading your poem, I am on my nerves cuz my X result is going to be announced.
I loved the imagery:)
Keep writing!

[Surya]

Always dear...Thank you Neetha...:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very good poem and very nicely penned..

[Surya]

Thank you Farhan...:)

[Pravir]

Superb . . . . a well described and very beautifully crafted lines . . . i loved to read it surya ji . . Moments squeezed where deck of cards
Scattered, Hanging through invisible webs in
Confused, violent grey air
Just a snap, all the beauty vanished away.
Specially this stanza . . . great work

[Surya]

Thank you o much Pravir...Glad you liked it...:)

[Psychotic Lily]

This is a very deep poem, and my brain can't catch up I need it three times. But the more I read it the more I understand the emotions and fallen in love with it all the more.

"Cam needs a visionary eye,
I need a hand to click those
Scattered moments in noon and night.." this is my favorite line to me it says we capture the moments of our lives at any time keeping it as precious memories.

Keep writing beautiful poems!

[Surya]

Haha, Thank you for your patience...Thank you so kuch lily for your kind visit and words, am glad for them...:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ahh yes, some moments are worth being captured and cherished forever. Lovely write, Surya.

[Surya]

Yeah some are, Thank you so much Yumna..:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

you're welcome, Surya. A pleasure :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and wonderful poetry dear Surya.
"Moments squeezed where deck of cards
Scattered, Hanging through invisible webs in
Confused, violent grey air
Just a snap, all the beauty vanished away."
The above lines were my favorite and I understand the thoughts. The ending was perfect. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Thank you so much John...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.