Koh Nahi Sakta..

What I felt..

Chamkte taare din mein bi dikhe aapki hasi mein

aapki aankho ki duniya mein koh gaye hum

Lagta hai Chaand aagaya mujhe milne..

Zaran sochu mein bhi itni Nahsa kaise hua

aankhe khul gayi humari, aur dekhe kaha

Hasina toh sadi kya lipti, Nasha chadgayi hume....

Hum sharaabhi toh nahi, par mann tasalli hogayi

aur hum aapki ishq ki nasha mein koh gaye...

Dhoor kya rehte ho mujse

Kabi paas toh aao, Baaho me bandi karlo

Aapki aankhon me khone keliye tayyar hai hum...

Par aap aise kar nahi sakte toh 

Mein aapko koh nahi sakta...

Reviews

[Abhishek Asthana]

pleased to see that my friend has developed a relation with hindi poetry... coming to your poem... this is so cute... just a few spelling errors i can see... "" nasha chad gyi mujhe for nasha chad gya muhse.. par man tasalli ho gyi for man ko tasalli ho gyi... ishq ki nasha me koh gaye for ishq ke nashe me kho gye... baaho me bandi karlo for baaho me band karlo... and the title should be " KHO NAHI SAKTA for KOH NAHI SAKTA""... just to make it more understandable u can update it... awesome piece of writing... dost suroor sa chaa gya hampar b ise padhkar... :)

[Surya]

I will, I will.....Thank you ABhishek for you kind visit and words, am glad for them...:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very good use of the words and a wonderful work again..superb write

[Surya]

Thank you Farhan...:)

[Priyanshi]

"chamkte taare din mein bi dikhe aapki hasi mein
aapki aankho ki duniya mein koh gaye hum
Lagta hai Chaand aagaya mujhe milne.." loved these lines so so so much, Surya, though the whole is the excellent...great work, friend.

[Surya]

Thanks a lot Priyanshi, am happy to see your reviews, They are very encouraging and boosts me up...Tjank you....:)

[Priyanshi]

That's my pleasure, Surya.

[Hope]

This is a beautiful work Surya:)
I loved the first stanza!
Another magical Hindi poem!

[Surya]

Haha, Thank you so much Neetha..:)

[Hope]

My pleasure:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

beautiful in a way....i loved this write of your surya!

[Surya]

Thank you Dear..glad you loved it...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Ufff....so sweet...I really liked each and every sentence.

[Surya]

Haha, Thank you So much Saher...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. :)