Kitaabi Jung...

Treasures in Hindi-urdu, Still am finding them....

Suna tha, Kahaani likh rahe the aap,

Gazab hai aapki baatein,

Jabibi aap mere naam lete ho 

yaad nahi aate woh raate woh yaadein..

Intezaar Kar raha hu kitaab padne ka

dekhe, kahi is fakir kya farebi bane..

Yaad hai mujhe aap ki baatein

"Ye kya dastoor hai shayari likhne ka furqat ke baad"...

Par kya kare

Khafaa ulfat ki pyaas toh bujaane pade ...

Bujane ke koshish kya kiya,

Lafzon se pyaar hogaya, 

Soch raha tha Ishq kaise hua inse

Jawaab milgaya, aapki ruh basi hai mere lafzon mein...

Aap kehte the maut bi hazir hai mere pyaar mein,

Aaj wohi Joote baaton aate hai khwaabon mein...

Na mein uta hu na mein roya hu...Par ek baat kehna bul gaye aap se

Dekhe hum bi konsa baadshah ruke hume 

Pyaar ki jung ladnekaa, Teri aina pe kasam

sab harne ko tayar hu jeetne liye...

Bus itna dekna chahta hu.

Aapke neeli neeli aanken kahe 

"Hume bi aap se Pyaar hai"

Reviews

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very good and interesting poem..

[Surya]

Thank you Farhan...:)

[Abhishek Asthana]

so ambitious and cute piece of writing surya.. :)

[Surya]

Thank you Abhishek...:)

[Mr.Writer]

Very well written poem Surya :)
Keep it up

[Wajiha Nayeem]

nice one....just really wonderful

[Surya]

Haha, Thank you so much Wajihaa..:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Nice thoughts are beautifully woven in this poem....Well done.

[Surya]

Thank you Saher...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Sofia]

A beautiful write..these days I'm getting to see many hindi-urdu writes...nd im loving​ it..choice of words is amazing..keep up the gud work..😊

[Surya]

Thnq so much Sofia...:)

[Sofia]

My pleasure!!

[Priyanshi]

"aapki ruh basi hai mere lafzon mein..."...tis line is one of my fav. line , infact the ending of the poem is the best.... yuhi likhte raho nawab sahab....hahaha.....
your work is always the most excellent, keep it up, friend.

[Surya]

Haha..Nawab aur hum..na ji...
Thank you so much Priyanshi ....am glad you enjoyed...:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure, Surya...