Ko Gaya Hum Nawaab...

Asli zindagi toh ko chuke hum, 

Dundte dundte pata chali ki hum koun hai...

Hum tamaam maahir bi nahi panno ke bina,

Mushkil sa khel zindagi ka, 

jeetne ki koshish me waqt beetgaya

Par seekhliya jeetne me kuch maza nahi hai,

Haar ne ki qayanat me hai shabab, 

Dunde toh mile zaroor...

Isi khel mein sab kogaya is gareeb ne,

Lekin pehli baar kone se hume bane Nawaab..

Sifar se kya guzraa, Jazba kya banhe Likhne ka

Kuch paaya kuch koya, ab lagta hai ki 

Mujhe sukhoon milgaya aur mein ghar wapis aagaya.. 

Reviews

[Hope]

"Par seekhliya jeetne me kuch maza nahi hai,
Haar ne ki qayanat me hai shabab"
I loved those lines.
Keep writing:)

[Surya]

Sure I will...Thank you Neetha...:)

[Hope]

My pleasure:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very good poem surya but you just need to change that work from "ko" to "kho" that will sound better..otherwise it is very good

[Surya]

I will...Thank you Farhan...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

wonderful surya!....great work.

[Surya]

Thank you Dear....:)

[Najam Us Saher]

So wise words.....honestly very nicely written......

[Surya]

Thank you so much Saher....glad you liked it...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. :)

[Priyanshi]

Yeh words aapke hum dil tak chu gaye.....day by day you are becoming brilliant poet, I must say....likhte raho nawab sahab..
"Sifar se kya guzraa, Jazba kya banhe Likhne ka
Kuch paaya kuch koya, ab lagta hai ki
Mujhe sukhoon milgaya aur mein ghar wapis aagaya.. "...... are the best lines that I loved.

[Surya]

Thank you so much Priyanshi for your kind words and visit...am happy to know that you loved it.....and yeah I will...Thank you...:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure,friend.