I'll Be The Same....

First time I tried in lyrics...

I'll be the same and I try the sane,

I wanna lay under a tree on a ocean,

Wanna swim and wanna fly, But

I'll be the same and I try the sane....

Hit the lights on, we'll be the same,

darkest of treasures tuning in your eyes

I wanna dance and wanna stay with them

But I promise I'll be the same

I promise that one day you'll be the same

But I can't stay...

I'll be the same looking you,

I'll be alone loving you

But I'll be the same and I'll try the same...

ohhoo oooo,,aooo ,,ooo

ohhoo oooo,,aooo ,,ooo..

screaming voices will be the same,

dancing treasures will be the same,

loving eyes 'll be the same,

But I can't stay...

Reading your texts when missing you,

memories I play to remind you,

But I will be the same,

Miles and Miles away

but my love is the same and I'll be the same

dancing in the sky running in waters

see Ill be the same

ohhoo oooo,,aooo ,,ooo

ohhoo oooo,,aooo ,,ooo..

I'll be the same and be a sane,

Wanna swim and wanna fly,

But I promise I'll be the same,

and I try Insane...

I promise that one day you'll be alone,

But I promise I will be the same,

But I can't stay....

You'll be alone, you'll be alone...

I'll be the same and I try sane..

ohhoo oooo,,aooo ,,ooo

ohhoo oooo,,aooo ,,ooo....

Author's Note

Hope it's good....Is it good?

Reviews

[Manasa.L]

Its very good just like a song we can even sing it with a tune. I love writing lyrical poems and sing it. I liked the poem/song. Its good explaining how one feels about being insane yet being themselves.

[Surya]

It is, I feel so about the insanity...try them and you will definitely write and sing, Thank you Manasa for your kind words and visit...:)

[Manasa.L]

Welcome...:)

[barleygirl]

WOW! This really does read like a song! I love music & my poetry can be lyrical, but I've never written a song! I am intrigued by your refrain: "same/sane" which is an interesting combination . . . it shows your always-original thought processes, which make such a message feel whimsical & playful, as well as being a little philosophical. Thanks for sharing your word play!

[Surya]

THanks for your generous review...Am glad for your words...:)

[Tony Jordan]

Keep this up Surya and you'll go far...

[Surya]

Thank you Tony for your kind words, it means to me....Thank you for your kind visit...am glad for it...:)

[CAPOLAVORO]

Be the same Surya as you are always great in making this one. :)

[Surya]

I will and Thank you so much dear friend, am glad for your visit and thank ful for your words...:)

[Abhishek Asthana]

i like the flow, and extraordinary one... u perfectly wrote it as a lyrics-writer... all the best.. keep up the good job

[Surya]

Thank you Abhishek...:)

[Mr.Writer]

Wow, the lyrics were amazing! If there could be music, that would be amazing!
Keep it up

[Surya]

Well i try for it, Thank you Shaan for your words and visit....:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

One of your best..really enjoyed each and every word of the poem

[Surya]

Thank you Farhan for your kind visit and words, am glad you liked it....:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem.
"I'll be the same and be a sane,
Wanna swim and wanna fly,
But I promise I'll be the same,
and I try Insane..."
I need this poem. I need some dancing and some song. A little insanity is good sometime. Thank you for dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Thank you dear John...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[wordman]

looks like a top ten to me

[Surya]

Hahaha, Thank you so much Wordman, It means to me....:)

[Raj Sahu]

The refrain you wrote in your poem is very well. There's also onomatopoeia in the poem. Well penned. I liked the work. 😊

[Surya]

Thank you Raj....:)