Mom...

The very first day of my life you believed in me,
Everyday may not be a day without you,
Everyday doesn't seem to pass without your voice,
Everyday is worthy with your beautiful eyes,
Every word from you is music for me,
My dear mom it's your day, Mother's Day,
Now a days I miss you more and more
seeing true colours of this filthy world,
But I found one friend same like you,
Cares a lot and hates a lot, but she is you,
Though she couldn't match you,
Mom, a word means my world,
Thank you,
For your patience at my stupidity,
For tolerating me as who am,
For Being my mom, Love you beauty...

Reviews

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

What do we do without mom? we think about how much we miss her.

Heart felt and raw, much enjoyed sir.

[Surya]

Thank you Mr.e for your kind visit and words...:)

[Fathom]

So good , i always love poems based on mothers. Yours is so lovely and brilliant!!

[Surya]

Thank you so much Fathom, am glad for your visit and words...:)

[Sofia]

Lovely!! I really love poems dedicated to mothers...mothers are like superheroes...A beautifully penned write..Thank you for sharing..

[Surya]

Yep they are....Thank you Sofia..:)

[Sofia]

You're welcome :)

[The earth (Titan maphah..]

I like it so much well written...

[Surya]

Thank you so much...:)

[Manisha]

Very nice poem dedicated to your mom. Mother is such an angel to this Earth... Too nice writing. Last line was very delightful. Glad to read such a poem after a long time. Keep it up.
Have lots of care for your mom.
Happy mother's day to all the loving moms in this world...
Delightful writing...

[Surya]

Thank you...:)

[Anjali]

I really really liked it, a lot! The last lines are my favorite, just beautiful. I'm sorry I wasn't able to review before on this amazing poem. A brilliant poem, indeed!

[Surya]

ohhh..So kind of you, Thank you sooo much Anjali....Hope you had a great Mother's day with ur Mom....:)

[Anjali]

Same to you!😁

[Wajiha Nayeem]

this is soo respectful and nice.....wish ur mum a happy mother's day from my side...

[Surya]

Sure I will, Thanks a lot Wajiha for your kind visit and words..:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

my pleasure su!!!

[barleygirl]

The best aspect of your poem is the way you express yourself with no inhibitions, very relaxed & natural sounding. This doesn't sound like flowery verse, but rather like down-to-earth conversation. Any mother would love to have such a tribute written especially for her. Great job in drawing a word picture with lots of details.

[Surya]

A writer must have his own voice and it should be natural to readers, That's what I believe in...read moreA writer must have his own voice and it should be natural to readers, That's what I believe in...
Thank you so much Margie for your words and visits, am glad to see your words, Thank you...:)

[Hope]

You rocked with the last three lines.....
Its truly a great and meaningful work......
Happy Mother's Day.:)

[Surya]

Happy mother's day......Thank you so much Naat.. :)

[Hope]

My pleasure......

[Mr.Writer]

Awe, so graceful and beautiful Surya...
Mothers are really important people in the world, as they are the reasons of why we're alive in this world...
Amazing poem Surya!
Keep it up!!

[Surya]

Yeah they are....and yes I agree....
Thank you so much Shaaan...:)