Solution From A Problem

Finding darkest treasures in a scary night,

entered an old mysterious cave, no way out,

no lights though, ony a violin to turn off fear

Found a scary ghost but it's beautful, twinkling in white gown.

Trembling in fear after those reflecting waves of 

Feary warnings from that beauty in a gown,

Now teaching up's and down's in a life 

Boosting up after her words, gaining energy to face this world..

And night ended after the glowing rays visiting old cave,

Now I could see the ghost as a beautiful lady, confused, 

And asked what is the truth, Nights's vision of Ghostly look or

Finest beauty in Morning? 

She answered

It's your state of mind seeing things defines your vision,

Am a beauty in morning rays as everyone could see,

Am a ghost to them who sees darkest of visions,

But am a beauty in a hidden treasure of beasty dark.

It's upto you to see me as you desire,

But am a beauty in a beast,

A light in dark, a melody in evil,

But am a Lesson if you wanna learn...

I got it now, It's our perception of determining

Every moment in lives determines our life,

So there is a beauty in every evil if we could see,

Every Hardest and strangest moment have a solution

If we have eyes and brains could foresee the solution Instead of sobbing....

Reviews

[Paradox]

A big CLAP! What a wonderful moral! Worth learning. But the best of it is that, the way it is conveyed. It was brilliant. Keep it up.

[Surya]

Ohho..Thank you Paradox..:)

[Paradox]

You are most welcome.

[Anjali]

The way you told the message in this poem is incredible! It's beautiful. Keep it up!😊

[Surya]

Thank you so much Anjali...:)

[Anjali]

No problem!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

i wish every ghost would look beautiful and wouldn't scare us off..and give us some nice life lessons....great and cute imagination suu!

[Surya]

Yeah am here to teach you, haha...well,
Thank you dear and you are a beautiful ghost, just kidding..Thank you So much Wajiha...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

oh what....am a beautiful ghost!! hahha...suu.

[Surya]

Yeah u r pretty scary but can't assume without u....

[Wajiha Nayeem]

ahhahaha.....suu!..i am scaryy?

[Surya]

Yeah you are a beauty in scarry world...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hahha...how sweet!

[Surya]

Not more than you sweetly...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Very strong message conveyed very well through an interesting story. I really liked this a lot. Beautifully written. Well done.

[Surya]

Thank you so much Saher....:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Haha! Beautiful ghost,
Some encouraging thoughts in this which gave us few strong message..love it

[Surya]

Haha, Yeah she is beautiful...
Thank you Farhan...:)

[Priyanshi]

A scary ghost, but beautiful, hahaha... the motto behind the poem was strong... that there is at least some beauty hidden in every evil if we observe. This line is so inpiring-
"Every Hardest and strangest moment have a solution
If we have eyes and brains could foresee the solution Instead of sobbing...."
Great work, Surya. Loved it.

[Surya]

Yeah it's a beautiful ghost, haha...
Thank you so much Priyanshi...:)

[Priyanshi]

Pleasure is mine. I loved the concept of beautiful ghost

[Surya]

Well, me too, haha..:)