Solution From A Problem

Finding darkest treasures in a scary night,

entered an old mysterious cave, no way out,

no lights though, ony a violin to turn off fear

Found a scary ghost but it's beautful, twinkling in white gown.

Trembling in fear after those reflecting waves of 

Feary warnings from that beauty in a gown,

Now teaching up's and down's in a life 

Boosting up after her words, gaining energy to face this world..

And night ended after the glowing rays visiting old cave,

Now I could see the ghost as a beautiful lady, confused, 

And asked what is the truth, Nights's vision of Ghostly look or

Finest beauty in Morning? 

She answered

It's your state of mind seeing things defines your vision,

Am a beauty in morning rays as everyone could see,

Am a ghost to them who sees darkest of visions,

But am a beauty in a hidden treasure of beasty dark.

It's upto you to see me as you desire,

But am a beauty in a beast,

A light in dark, a melody in evil,

But am a Lesson if you wanna learn...

I got it now, It's our perception of determining

Every moment in lives determines our life,

So there is a beauty in every evil if we could see,

Every Hardest and strangest moment have a solution

If we have eyes and brains could foresee the solution Instead of sobbing....

Reviews

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Nice poem. I enjoyed the read thanks for sharing.

[Abhishek Asthana]

a bit different from others... so creative,,, really liked this unique piece of writing

[Surya]

Haha, Thank you so much Abhishek, glad you liked it...:)

[The earth (Titan maphah..]

wow this is what I'm talking about...an organized poem...well penned

[Surya]

Thank you for your kind visit and words...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing story in the poetry dear Surya.
"It's upto you to see me as you desire,
But am a beauty in a beast,
A light in dark, a melody in evil,
But am a Lesson if you wanna learn..."
I liked the complete poem and the above lines are true. Life is decisions and chooses. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Yep I agree, life is decisions and choices one would choose, Thank you John....:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Surya.

[duff]

Individual variances and how we deal with each moment. Negativity lingers if we feed it and beauty grows if we allow it. You did a great job on this. Thanks for sharing.

[Surya]

Thanks for stopping by...:)

[duff]

You're welcome:)

[barleygirl]

This is a very creative way to show instead of telling about how our attitudes define what we see in a thing. Your example (stanza following: "she answered") is well-stated to be all-encompassing rather than specific. Imaginative way to convey an important life lesson.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

perceptions....just like reading poetry, we see what we see...sometimes deep meanings, sometimes surface meanings...it just depends on perception...and how well we look.

[Surya]

Yeahh, It's all upto how we look..
Thank you J...:)

[wordman]

beautiful thoughts,you see with your mind and heart

[Surya]

Both are necessary....Thank you wordman.. :)

[Hope]

Its great and you really inspired me....
We just have to be positive and find the solution instead of worrying.........
A great work.....

[Surya]

Thank you so much Naat...:)

[Hope]

My pleasure......

[Mr.Writer]

Wow! This is just awesome Surya! The moral of the story clearly came up without being confusing...
Keep it up :)

[Surya]

I guess so...Thank you so much Shaan...:)