A Struggle To Win...

A dearest friend of mine inspired me in writing this, Thank you Wajiha..

Every sun rise ends with

A beautiful rise of moonlight

It's necessary to pass a hot mid day

to enjoy the cold and beautiful light..

It's must to cope with Pleasures

but after a struggle with struggles,

Damn these sadness, tears and struggles

But it's a beauty to evolve from a beast..

Every string is necessary to play music,

Every finger is necessary to hit a face,

Every tree is necessary for us to breathe,

Every tear is must to be lost to gain a smile.

Every fall should be faced to rise high,

Every wound is to be cherished to enlighten the joy,

Every rule is to break to create new,

Every creation is a miracle from a struggle.

So dear, cry and cry,

Fall again and again,

Break your heart, bones, everything,

Learn from them, Chase your vision

Every step of your's I wanna see them

Written in history, to pass on.

So folks, Get a worthy friend and

Chose a brave enemy, What are you looking at?

It may be a Girl friend, Family, Your dream

Anything it could be, believe in your will,

Follow your brave heart carry a tricky brain.

So dear nothing to worry till you breathe,

Many will be breakers, Many laugh,

It's you to run a marathon to lift a glory,

So go now...There is something waiting for you...

Author's Note

Hope you liked...:)

Reviews

[Farhan Shaikh]

"Every sun rise ends with
A beautiful rise of moonlight
It's necessary to pass a hot mid day
to enjoy the cold and beautiful light.."
My fav lines in this, and this is very good and encouraging..

[Surya]

Thank you Farhan...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Very encouraging. That's all I want to say.

[Surya]

Haha, Thank You Saher...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Miracles aren't fascinating accidents...they come from the struggles, and those who persist to find solutions to problematic events in life...
the worse the situation, the more unbelievable the miracle seems to be...but miracles are made---much like light strikes in bowling...those seem like like, but the way the ball is thrown makes the luck.
love this piece.
j.

[Surya]

Thank You J for adding your words...am glad for them, Thank you for your visit and words..:)

[Mr.Writer]

"So go now...There is something waiting for you..."
So much hope you've bestowed upon this lovely poem Surya...
I like the positivity sense in it as well...
I was really engaged :)

[Surya]

You got it....Go on Shaan, haha....Well thank you for your words and visit...:)

[Mr.Writer]

Haha no problem :D

[Priyanshi]

Brilliant poem, Surya. It is an inspiring poem and observed beautiful use of words.
"Every sun rise ends with
A beautiful rise of moonlight".... are the best lines and the 5th paragraph is so well penned. Overall the best poem.

[Surya]

Thank you so much Priyanshi...:)

[Priyanshi]

You're welcome.