A Struggle To Win...

A dearest friend of mine inspired me in writing this, Thank you Wajiha..

Every sun rise ends with

A beautiful rise of moonlight

It's necessary to pass a hot mid day

to enjoy the cold and beautiful light..

It's must to cope with Pleasures

but after a struggle with struggles,

Damn these sadness, tears and struggles

But it's a beauty to evolve from a beast..

Every string is necessary to play music,

Every finger is necessary to hit a face,

Every tree is necessary for us to breathe,

Every tear is must to be lost to gain a smile.

Every fall should be faced to rise high,

Every wound is to be cherished to enlighten the joy,

Every rule is to break to create new,

Every creation is a miracle from a struggle.

So dear, cry and cry,

Fall again and again,

Break your heart, bones, everything,

Learn from them, Chase your vision

Every step of your's I wanna see them

Written in history, to pass on.

So folks, Get a worthy friend and

Chose a brave enemy, What are you looking at?

It may be a Girl friend, Family, Your dream

Anything it could be, believe in your will,

Follow your brave heart carry a tricky brain.

So dear nothing to worry till you breathe,

Many will be breakers, Many laugh,

It's you to run a marathon to lift a glory,

So go now...There is something waiting for you...

Author's Note

Hope you liked...:)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend.
"So dear nothing to worry till you breathe,
Many will be breakers, Many laugh,
It's you to run a marathon to lift a glory,
So go now...There is something waiting for you..."
The above lines. True wisdom shared. Thank you Surya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Thank you John..:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Abhishek Asthana]

very nicely written,,, like doses of encouragement,,, keep doing

[Surya]

Haha Thank you Abhishek...:)

[kayjayr]

I liked this poem very much.... This poem is inspiring....

[Surya]

Thank you sooo much, am glad for your visit,,,,:)

[Kathleen Montgomery]

This is very helpful to anyone trying to live life.

[Surya]

Thank you Kathleen for your words and visit...am glad you enjoyed...:)

[emmajoy]

' It's you to run a marathon to lift a glory,
So go now...There is something waiting for you...'

Such a long stream of worthy advice, worthy because it displays varying positives AND negatives in life and being. Perhaps the best example is Night and Day, without both we'd not understand what is to be lost or gained.

You place your words carefully, you inspire with both simple and complex thoughts. Thank you.

[Surya]

Thank you so much Emma for your warm visit and words..am glad for them...:)

[emmajoy]

Your words inspire.. thank YOU.

[barleygirl]

You have done a thoughtful job of selecting many diverse struggles (both good & bad) to exemplify how it can feel during the struggle to win. I especially love the "interlude" of two stanzas with "Every xxxx is necessary . . . " -- these ideas are fresh & original & thought-provoking. I have to admit the last two stanzas aren't as clear to me as the rest of your message.

[Surya]

Haha, First five stanzas are a part of message and the last two stanza are a kind of motivation, to boost up energy in readers....Thank you Margie...:)

[barleygirl]

In our current times, any pep talk is much needed . . . I'm blessed to have natural optimism, but I see so much misery & depression in many of the things I read here. I think it's cool to share encouragement if we have the gift of optimism.

[Surya]

Yeah it's cool...well thanks again..:)

[Sonakshi Arora]

This is so beautifully written!

[Surya]

Thank you Sonakshi....:)

[Hope]

Its a really inspirational poem, Surya..............
Success follows struggles!
Keep it up....

[Surya]

Yeah it does....Thank you so much Naat...:)

[Hope]

My pleasure.....

[Manasa.L]

What an inspirational and motivational poem, loved it. Amazing how you have transformed into a great writer, keep going friend. All the best, thanks for sharing your words.

[Surya]

Bowing to you Manasa ji With all my heart, I dare meet you once in my life time to share my Gratitude...
Truly am thank ful to you for your every word..Thank you for your appreciation...Am glad for them..:)

[Manasa.L]

That's nothing. A good work always needs an appreciation and as a writer myself I did that

[Surya]

But that means something to me...Thank you..:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

that's the spirit damn!!
this is what i wanted to hear from uh...great work manh....

[Surya]

Ohho..Thank you so much Wajiha...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

ohho...pleasure suu!