A Love Letter..

Feeling bored so a try on letter...

I don't know how to convey, but I must say it right now...

Three magical words, they have such a power to transform any being into a maddening soul..

It all started when am crossing a corridor and suddenly my heart started beating fast,

at same time some looks hitting at my back, I turned back without any conscious of me and I found 

you looking at me but you were walking, I couldn't clearly see your face..I feel same happened to you, But I don't know.

Every day from then I wanted to talk to you but you were busy so I couldn't make it out and

till now I have no memory of your face....But I know one thing am getting late..

You used to stand near by me whenever you notice me, but you hidden your face from me...

Such an enthusiasm to talk to you but I lose my nerves when am near to you, But I have to say this to you..

  I didn't seen you through my glasses,

  But my heart traced an Image of your's,

  May be am mad but am happy to be mad at you,

  I wanna sit with you at shores watching those stars,

  I wanna paint but with you as my brushes

  so that I can hold you every minute of my life,

  I wanna travel with you in my eyes

  and you at my back on my bike...

  I wanna write with my heart as ink

  where your's as sheets...

  I wanna dream in your magical world,

  I wanna stay in your heart forever and ever,

  I only need your eyes,

  Will you show up today speaking those words..

  I will gift you this world...

Author's Note

I guess these kind of letter works even today, may be not good at love letters...I wanna know,
How you felt reading this?

Reviews

[Gee]

When I first started dating my wife 1991, she lived 400 miles from me ( Scotland, me in England) and we used to write to each other. So much more special than a phone call and a treasure to keep.
I enjoyed reading this piece Surya

[Surya]

Letters means a lot than calls or texts...it's romantic too...hope you have pleasant life with your wife....
And thank you Gee for your kind visit and sharing your words....:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

such a cute one this is......wonderman!

[Surya]

Thank you Wajiha...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

pleasure!....suu

[Abhishek Asthana]

i guess you must be feeling bit relaxed after writing this letter... such a lovely piece it is... like it has been written in the language that can only be understood through heart... :)

[Surya]

Yeah a bit relaxed.....Thank you Abhishek..:)

[wordman]

a beautiful expression of your love

[Surya]

Haha Thank you Wordman...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Heart touching. I truly liked the way you expressed the feelings.

[Surya]

Thank you so much Saher...am glad you liked it..:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺

[Hope]

Lovely Read, Surya......
The lines "May be am mad but am happy to be mad at you" are quite magical and overflowing with Love.
Enjoyed.....:)

[Surya]

Ohho..Thank you so muchhh Naat for your kind review...:)

[Hope]

My pleasure...

[Farhan Shaikh]

I felt really good while reading this one, beautiful end and very well penned.
Thanx for sharing

[Surya]

Thank you so much Farhan...:)

[Mr.Writer]

Very sophisticated, beautiful and unique poem of yours Surya...
I really felt the love you were passing and really enjoyed!
Keep it up

[Surya]

Haha, Thank you Shaan..:)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem!

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle words and thoughts led the reader to the proper ending. We need the kinds words of love, concern and need. Thank you Surya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Thank you John.. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Manasa.L]

Wow what a beautiful letter. Every word has come from an amazing heart. The girl whoever gets it must be very lucky to have such a wonderful heart.
"Love is blind
but it shows the
right path.
Love is sky
that no one
can measure.
Love is nature,
the beauty and the beast"

- Manasa

[Surya]

Thank you so much Manasa, and your words are beautiful too....:)

[Manasa.L]

Thank you....