An End But Travelling Goes On...

It's an end and 
Prince founded crown
Hidden in deep blue 
Effervescent ocean..

Beats of broken heart
Stopped playing,
Peace is the only game
They started lending..

Days of sorrow habituated,
Memories stopped crying,
A leaf grown now on a
Moonlit ocean standing by storms.

Every seed sown doesn't 
Need to grow, 
Every step of your's 
Doesn't pay happiness...

But Travelling goes on
Till the end.....

Reviews

[CAPOLAVORO]

"It's an end and
Prince founded crown
Hidden in deep blue
Effervescent ocean.. "

At first I thought this one talks about an erotic scene. Lol, It kinda change on the last part. Anyways, I like the peace sound on this poem. Well done. :)

[Surya]

haha...Thank you dear friend..:)

[Abhishek Asthana]

so intense nd thoughtful... again a very nice creation...keep writing

[Surya]

I will, and thank you Abhishek for your kind visit and words..:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes there is even better music in the next life...at least the band plays on...and his music will live on for sure...especially in the purple rain of dreams.
j.

[Surya]

I believe so Sir, Thank you so much for your words, am glad for them..:)

[emmajoy]

Thoughtful words and well worth remembering, Surya. Perhaps those of us who have words at hand, can travel without even knowing it, storing magically until time comes.. as you say, 'Till the end..

[Surya]

Haha, Yeah....Thank you Emma..:)

[Tony Jordan]

Sometimes we are travelling without moving, it would seem.

[Surya]

Yeah, sometimes with thoughts...Thank you Tony..:

[Mr.Writer]

"But Travelling goes on
Till the end....."
Brilliant, amazing, awesome and engaging Surya!!!
Keep it up :)

[Surya]

Thank you so much Shaan...:)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Surya! :)

[Rojas]

Trials and success in turn. The attempt is paramount. Beautifully stated.

[Surya]

Thank you Rajat for your kind visit...:)

[Raj Sahu]

Good. Keep it up dear Surya! You have to shine like your name. Good Luck. 😊😊

[Surya]

Thank you Raj, hope I will, and i try my best for it...Thanks for your support....
Am glad to have friends like you guys....:)

[Raj Sahu]

The pleasure is all mine. 😊😊

[Surya]

No it's mine, hahaha...:)

[Raj Sahu]

Hahahaha 😂😂😂

[Najam Us Saher]

I liked the ending lines. I felt they were close to me. Memories stopped crying is a nice phrase infact we stop crying on the memories. Very nice poem had so much depth in it.

[Surya]

You got that, Thank you Saher for your kind visit and words...am glad you enjoyed it...:!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺

[Manasa.L]

A hunt for peace and the journey has been described very beautifully.
"Every seed sown doesn't
Need to grow,
Every step of your's
Doesn't pay happiness... "
Loved every word, amazingly woven word web.
Thanks for sharing.

[Surya]

Thank you so much Manasa, for your kind visit and words..am glad you enjoyed...:)