An End But Travelling Goes On...

It's an end and 
Prince founded crown
Hidden in deep blue 
Effervescent ocean..

Beats of broken heart
Stopped playing,
Peace is the only game
They started lending..

Days of sorrow habituated,
Memories stopped crying,
A leaf grown now on a
Moonlit ocean standing by storms.

Every seed sown doesn't 
Need to grow, 
Every step of your's 
Doesn't pay happiness...

But Travelling goes on
Till the end.....

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right my friend.
"Every seed sown doesn't
Need to grow,
Every step of your's
Doesn't pay happiness.."
Life is good days and bad days. We must go forward always. Thank you Surya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Bala Gorthi]

Well said Surya, the journey goes on whether there a joy or sorrow. A deep one! Well penned!

[Surya]

It goes on..Thank you Bala for your kind visit...:)

[apennylate]

Oceans of long words, princes and crowns, moonlit storms, sown seeds... Every step of the way does not guarantee happiness... But keep going till the end... Excellently penned...

[Surya]

Thank you so much....:)

[apennylate]

You are ever so welcome...

[barleygirl]

This message feels a bit abstract for my reading abilities. I like all your surprising & creative imagery, but I don't follow it like a cohesive message thru-out (just a preference, not a problem). My favorite part: "Every seed sown doesn't need to grow . . . every step of yours doesn't pay happiness" . . . can be a tough life lesson for some. But it can also apply to the writing life . . . everything we write doesn't have to be perfectly crafted & I find the less polished pieces to be more interesting sometimes becuz the gut-level feelings in the message are so true to life.

[Surya]

Polished work always seems to be polished but it's my heart that speaks and I transfer them onto paper...Glad to see your reviews and even more happy that you are sharing your thoughts...Thank you Margie...

[Wajiha Nayeem]

so true...so relieving...so wonderful....so surya!

[Surya]

So thanks To Wajihaa...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hahha.....

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"Beats of broken heart
Stopped playing,
Peace is the only game
They started lending.."

Loved this stanza the most. Sometimes the mind travels far more than the body..
Nicely penned, Surya. I enjoyed reading this :)

[Surya]

Thank you so much Yumna, But I loved every bit of it,...Hahaha...:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Surya. A pleasure always :)

[wordman]

we travel all our lives for real or in memory
our minds evolve

[Surya]

Yeah, I agree...and Thank you Wordman...:)

[Hope]

Life is a travel......
The fourth stanza is very meaningful.
Thanks for sharing......

[Surya]

Thank you Naat for your kind visit....:)

[Hope]

My pleasure ☺

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very nice read..
I like the third stanza more than the rest.
And the poem is truly awesome.
Well done surya..

[Surya]

Thank you so much Farhan..:)

[pia]

Every seed sown doesn't
Need to grow,
Every step of your's
Doesn't pay happiness...

this is really well written. the message here is extremely powerful. i loved the poem over all

[Surya]

Thank you so much Pia for your kind visit and words, am glad you enjoyed...:)