A Beautiful Thing....I Feel As..

What is the most beautiful feel to sense ...

Science seeking Einstein's brain or

Popping beats of Jackson,

Enthusiastic smile or

Maddening glance of Monroe.

Melodies from motherly nature or

Black and whites in Piano,

Utterly speech of cuckoo or

Moustache of Chaplin.

Rising sunrise or 

Midnight moon,

Twinkling stars or

Dance in ocean.

The above all can be seen,

But intangible bonding threads

Between the hearts can never be seen

And that's the most beautiful thing.

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

This poem is the best among yours. Last line said it all. Truly amazing and beautifully written.

[Surya]

Thank you so much..:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are so good...love all the references to Monroe, Charlie, Michael and Albert...
they are tangible living beings, but their legacies seem to be filled with a figurative spirit that is somewhat intangible.
j.

[Surya]

Yep their spirits are intangible, Thank you so much...:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"But intangible bonding threads
Between the hearts can never be seen
And that's the most beautiful thing."

True indeed. I think this is by far the best of your poems that I've read. Nicely penned, Surya.

[Surya]

Thank you so much Yumna, Missed your words, and now am glad I have few of them, Thank you...:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Surya. Yeah I've been busy and not able to be here as much as I would like 😶
read moreYou're welcome, Surya. Yeah I've been busy and not able to be here as much as I would like 😶
A pleasure always reading your works 😊

[Wajiha Nayeem]

surya...surya...suryaa....!!!
nailed it manh...great work!!!

[Surya]

Thank you...Thank you...Thank you sooo much Wajihaaa....am glad you enjoyed...:)

[Anjali]

Your poem is as beautiful as the Name of your poem, just simply beautiful! It's so thoughtful and amazing. You never seem to disappoint. Keep on writing and enlightening us!😊

[Surya]

Thank you so much Anjali...I will try my best to put a smile on everyone's lips.....Thank you so much For your gracious words, am glad for them...:)

[Anjali]

No problem

[Priyanshi]

How beautifully the words are mentioned is so brilliant ......the whole poem was so beautiful....very well portrayed it, Surya.

[Surya]

Thank you so much Priyanshi, am glad for your every word, Keep visiting...:)

[Abhishek Asthana]

emphasis has been made on the last stanza is almost like the tribute you want to pay to those beautiful feelings...that is the significant factor... nice creation :)

[Surya]

Yeah on last stanza...Thank you so kuch Abhishek for your visit and words..am glad for themm...:)

[wordman]

the most rewarding feeling is to be loved and to love

[Surya]

Yeah I agree..Thank you wordman...:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Wow! That last stanza is magnificent..enjoyed the poem surya.
Very well written

[Surya]

Thank you so much Farhan...:)..am glad for your words..:)

[horizon]

the last stanza was the hero of the entire poetry...all the 3 stanzas came alive from this last one..nice one though

[Surya]

Thank you Horizon....:)