A Fight With Life...

May be a fight...

A day of smile now turned 
Into ruthless battles,
Where I could see none
Behind me...

I can sense your tears
can't you see my wounds.
A healing power
Where to find?

Those battles where
I facing alone,
Just to own my life
Fighting again and again...

Finally, I got life is 
A grand master who 
Giggling at my struggles,
But I wanna wave them with scars of smile..

Reviews

[Hope]

Great work, Surya...
Facing life with a smile is what is needed.....
Keep it up:)

[Surya]

Thank you So much Naat, for your kind visit and words..am glad for them..:)

[Hope]

My pleasure........

[pia]

this is amazing
its really deep
however just one thing id like to point out (if its purposely written like that then its fine) that shouldn't it be 'giggles at my struggles'
anyway this is written beautifully regardless, its very deep and open ended which i love cuz i can relate to it in my own personal way. great job !!

[Surya]

Giggling here I used in present..i.e..,
Life is still giggling at my struggles...
That's it...
Thank you for your kind visit and adding up your thoughts...Am glad you enjoyed, keep visiting and correct me wherever possible...:)