A Fight With Life...

May be a fight...

A day of smile now turned 
Into ruthless battles,
Where I could see none
Behind me...

I can sense your tears
can't you see my wounds.
A healing power
Where to find?

Those battles where
I facing alone,
Just to own my life
Fighting again and again...

Finally, I got life is 
A grand master who 
Giggling at my struggles,
But I wanna wave them with scars of smile..

Reviews

[Bala Gorthi]

Battles everywhere internal and external, making us question the why of our existence. When the truth unfolds I think that smile is what stays though scarred.
Thank you this beautiful work. Well done!

[Surya]

Well, that's truth ...Thank you Bala for your kind visit and words....:)

[barleygirl]

As I read this, at first I was thinking about how it must be in a war-torn land such as Syria, where a day of smile can be turned to ruthlessness in an instant. But as I read on, I also included the ideas of people who seem to find a fight in everything that's said or done by others who have no bad intentions (kinda like our dreadful new prez in the USA -- Trump). I like the way your poem ends on a hopeful note.

[Surya]

Hope is what always needed...Thank you Margie...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right my friend.
"Those battles where
I facing alone,
Just to own my life
Fighting again and again... "
The above lines are true. Never-ending battle to keep our sanity. Thank you Surya for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Yeah you are correct.....Thank you John...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Surya.

[Najam Us Saher]

Scars of smiles....very nice phrase. I liked this poem the way you expressed strength was nicely done.

[Surya]

Thank you Najam for your kind visit and words....:)
Am glad for them...

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome :)

[B]

I love the strength behind your words
Life should be this endless fight with all the past and all those obstacles standing in our way. Only to find freedom of the soul. Eventually living out one's dreams. Anything is possible if you will it enough. Really well done

[Surya]

Yeah, I agree, anything is possible, am thankful for your visit and words, am glad for them...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

scars of smiles!!!...i love this word used here and surya, lemme tell you this the best one among all your other writes...the one with an immense feeling and amazing thoughts....great work wonderman!...keep going

[Surya]

OoHhoo, Thank you so much Wajiha...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hahaha!!pleasure suryaaa!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"scars of smiles"

love scars, wounds and mars---if we can survive with smiles, that is a good thing...but there are battles along the way...even in the best of relationships...
j.

[Surya]

Yeah, even in the best....Thank You J for your kind visit and words, am glad for them...:)

[Mr.Writer]

Another engaging, awesome poem by Surya!!! :)
It was very clear and well worded and was superb!! :)
I just found 1 line mistake and corrected it for you :)
1. "Those battles which
I'm facing alone"
Overall, amazingly done my friend!

[Surya]

Thank you so much Shaan, I will correct it for sure...:)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem Surya :)

[wordman]

you can conquer all situations with a laugh

[Surya]

Yeah, I agree...Thank you So much...:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

That is very good idea to live..
Too much positiveness in this poem..

[Surya]

Yeah, Thank you Farhan...:)