Dad..

Dad..

A Poem by Surya
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On behalf of every human who lost DAD..

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How to start?....
How can I forget those smiles behind my kicks,
How can I forget those hands which fed me,
How can I forget your smiles behind my complaints,
How can I forget those days we travelled,
How can I forget those words which taught me life,
How can I forget your way of living inspired many,
How can I forget your innocent eyes bearing humanity as whole,
How can I forget your hands serving others,
How to live without you?,
Dad each and every second I live is a gift from you..
I love you Is a very small word I could say to you..
All these lines are worthless, and if it is that, each and every second I write about you but I know that would be an empty stomach still, or else I would write books...but I know my life of writing is less for you...
Thank you dad, no it's not thank you, love you dad, you are the person behind my smile and you are the one shown me how to live a life..

© 2017 Surya


Author's Note

Surya
I have seen people who lost their parents, That's so sad rite, I have seen their pain nothing can compromise and fulfill their loss...So I tried to explain their sorrow in my words...Hope you felt..:)

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its bit emotional... beautifully phrased... loved this one... keep writing

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Yeah, Thank you Abhishek..:)
Very nicely written. Any writing on father means a lot to me. Thank you so much for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Yeah same here, Dad, the word urself means a lot to me...Thank You Saher..
Surya

7 Years Ago

Itself*...
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

Yes right....You're welcome ☺
just lost my dad in March---i echo these words, exactly..and Mom three years ago...they were 97 and 92....thank you. i miss them.
j.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Ohh, so sorry for the lose...I believe they are great parents...
It's so good..
I'm speechless.. Surya..
It is One of your best work.
Wonderful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Thank you Farhan...:)
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Gee
Can't relate to this at all as my old man upped sticks and left us when we were but shirt button sized arses....

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Ohh..that's so sad, sorry...
Gee

7 Years Ago

It was nigh on 50 years ago. You just love the other parent even more..

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Added on April 23, 2017
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Surya
Surya

Hyderabad, India



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