Frumpy Phantom..

Frumpy Phantom..

A Poem by Surya

It is a dark night 
Under the tree of APRICOT,
I see a MOOSE at a distance
Turning into a FRUMPY PHANTOM,
Watching it, my body begin to SPASM,
I even started Tasting BITTERNESS in 
APRICOT where my vision MANGLED it's sweetness.
My alarm now singing saying wakeup
it's now SEVEN in the morning.
Smiling now after CURDLING
My CLAIRVOYANT vision with my terror dream.

© 2017 Surya


Author's Note

Surya
For ten words contest..

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damn,and you hit them all !

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Haha, Thank you so much...:)
Great used of words. I hope you win! Break a leg. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Thank you my friend, I did won a prize for it....
A very interesting and fun poem to read. I liked the use of the language leading to logical ending. Thank you Surya for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much John..:)
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
This is one of your very best "10-word" poems that I've read so far! This is quite playful & brilliant, especially using all these unusual words in a shorter poem. Many images were spawned in my mind as I read & then when I got to the part where it's only a dream, I realized these image-laden flashes in my mind were similar to the sensations of dreaming. Very mind-blowing. Where do you get all these 10-word ideas? Contests on this website? (I never look at the contests).

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Yeah in this website, Thank You Margie for your words and visit...am glad for them..:)
OMG! That's quite imaginative. You have woven a beautiful story in this short write. Well done!
Thank you for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Thank a lot Bala...For your visit and words...Actually your write on Phantom inspired me to write so.. read more
Bala Gorthi

7 Years Ago

Glad to know that Surya. I think that is how this cafe helps us. Keep writing.
nice one surya!
i liked the way you used each word...and framed wonderful stanzas outta them.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Haha, Thank you Wajiha always, ...:)
Have a great day..:)
Wajiha Nayeem

7 Years Ago

anytime.....u too have a great day.
Surya

7 Years Ago

Yep..no thank you, but still...
Hello Surya. Thank you for taking the 10 Words I Give contest challenge. It would be scary to see a moose transform into a 'frumpy phantom'. The weirdest dreams come in the a.m. before the alarm chimes. That's been my experience. Good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Thank You Wicahpi, Yeah it is weirdest, haha...:)
A pleasure to participate..:)
Wicahpi

7 Years Ago

Weird is a beautiful thing! You're welcome.
This is awesome...Very creative !
Thank you for sharing :)!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Aaha, Thank you Zaisham for your words and visit, am glad for themm...:)
zaisham9393

7 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
That's wonderful, a ten word contest. This is an apt writing and stunning with those words. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Thank you Manasa..:)

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Added on April 22, 2017
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