kinda Shayari..

A Poem by Surya

Not magical but it's intentional meaning is worthy for me and to you may be...

Rabb ki ruh basi hai
Insaano ki dil mein
Bus aankhon me jaadoo
Ki kami hai dekhne liye..

Log kehte hai,

Gulzaaro me kuch jaado hai
Jin ki awaaz se log muskuraane lagte hai,
Par dil se muskuraane ki awaaz me
Kuch jaado hai, jisse me badal jaata hu..

Kehte hai,

Sukh dukh me saath raho,
Par me bolta hu,
Sukh me mujhe yaad karo,
Dukhi me kabhi chod nahi sakta hu..

© 2017 Surya

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Bala Gorthi

A very good promise penned in beautiful words.

Posted 7 Years Ago

7 Years Ago

Hope so...Thank you Bala for your kind visit and words..am glad for themm...:)

Priyanshi

Surya , I love reading shayari too much . it was a great one.

Posted 7 Years Ago

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Priyanshi...:)

horizon

ooohhhh was that a commitment i won't leave you alone in grief or sorrows...nice

Posted 7 Years Ago

7 Years Ago

Yeah..kind of....Thank you..:)

Abhishek Asthana

nicely tried...you are learning in a learning phase...the aura of this poem is good...i believe one day you will become proficient in writing hindi pieces as well... keep writing

Posted 7 Years Ago

7 Years Ago

Yeah, still learning....MAy be one day..Thank you Abhishek.

writ rajat

Bus aankhon me jaadoo
Ki kami hai dekhne ke liye

Posted 7 Years Ago

writ rajat

Rabb ki ruh basi hai
Insaano ke dil mein

Posted 7 Years Ago

writ rajat

sabdo ka intihaan mat liya karo warna ghalib prakat ho jaega

Posted 7 Years Ago

writ rajat

bahut mistakes hai yaar thora sudhaaro waise koshish achi kiye ho quran padho hindi me phir kiuch urdu jaan jaoge

Posted 7 Years Ago

7 Years Ago

That's how it is and why am here, everyone praises but none says, Rajat could you please correct the.. read more

Manasa.L

There are some structural mistakes but a good poem, I liked it.
Ki kami hai dekhne 'ke' liye..
'Dukh' me kabhi chod nahi sakta hu.
I hope you don't mind for me being critic.