Am I..

Words just pounded my heart..

Am not an art by Picasso,
Am a vision of my own sense,
Am a pen filled with passion,
Am a brush to paint my life.

Am not those words in your book
But an autograph on your book..
Am not a dream in your sleep
But a dream, let's no sleep..

I might be a star in your sky
But am a bond in your heart
And am the romance in your brain,
Not a kid to live in your lies..

Reviews

[Farhan Shaikh]

Awesome Surya
This poem describes what you really are and that's really amazing...
Wonderful

[Surya]

Thank you Farhan..:)

[Bacchus]

wow-
a not a kid to live
in your lies...

may those that hinder
the least of these
have a millstone around
their necks in the end...

passion and life
...still a kid-
but not hindered

let's come to life this way!

[Surya]

Let's try then...haha, Thank you Bacchus fpr your kind visit and words...:)

[wordman]

lovely image of who you are

[Surya]

Guess so, Thank you for yout vis and words..:)

[Manasa.L]

This really seems to be pointing to someone who has hurt you. All those they call us art, beauty etc.. doesn't wash off the lies they framed us with. It hurts. Your words are a true spirit of those who have got stuck in those lies.
Beautifully expressed...:)

[Surya]

Yeah for some one who hurts me, and a dedication to evry person who has been hurted, haha, Thank you Manasa for your visit and words...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

The last line was hard hitting. I liked the entire narration I am not an art and so on... beautifully written well done.

[Surya]

Thank you..for your visit and words..:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺

[It Will Change]

Nicely written...enjoyed reading it :)

[Surya]

Thank you my friend for your kind visit, am glad you enjoyed it...:)