Am I..

Words just pounded my heart..

Am not an art by Picasso,
Am a vision of my own sense,
Am a pen filled with passion,
Am a brush to paint my life.

Am not those words in your book
But an autograph on your book..
Am not a dream in your sleep
But a dream, let's no sleep..

I might be a star in your sky
But am a bond in your heart
And am the romance in your brain,
Not a kid to live in your lies..

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I truly liked this poem.
"I might be a star in your sky
But am a bond in your heart
And am the romance in your brain,
Not a kid to live in your lies.."
The questions above. I do like. They are needed to be asked often. Thank you Surya for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Thank You John..:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Michael S]

This is a beautiful work with full of emotions. Liked the comparisons and metaphors. Thanks for sharing.

[Surya]

Thank You Michael..I hope I I him..:)

[Surya]

Find him**

[Wajiha Nayeem]

this is written so truly and it shows the exact feeling you got in your heart.....it's beautifully written and amazingly expressed...
keep it up wonderman....keep it up!

[Surya]

Wonderman, haha, Thank you Wajiha, lots actually for your help and as being a friend...Hope you enjoyed..:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hahah...anytime...
yes i did...such a pretty poetry it was!

[emmajoy]

Two extremes it seems: ' 'And am the romance in your brain, Not a kid to live in your lies..'

Your words should be gently written on the heart - perhaps they are. There's a feeling of.. 'would you take me in all my guises because i could be precious for and to you'. But, says you.. 'you need to be kinder, more sincere, not ruin what can or could have been'. Perhaps.

[Surya]

Ohh, words rite, mean a lot...I will try Emma, Thank you for your visit and review am glad..:)

[Hope]

Great poem! I loved the optimism and energy flowing through the poem. Keep writing Surya!

[Surya]

Thank you Naat for your visit, keep visiting, am glad you enjoyed..:)

[Adil]

"Am not a dream in your sleep
But a dream, let's no sleep.."...remarkable words..thanks for sharing..:)

[Surya]

Haha, thank you Adil for visiting and appreciating am glad you enjoyed...:)

[Adil]

Sure bro..Keep it up..:)

[Bala Gorthi]

Wow! A beautiful piece Surya! The first two sections are my favorite. I see the growth of the poet in you with each of your writes. Keep up the good work.
Thank you for the sharing.

[Surya]

Am glad with your words, sure I will try my best, Thank you Bala for your kind visit and words..am thank ful always..:)

[writ rajat]

You proved the saying of a great writer that if you want to be immortal break a writer's heart

[Surya]

Yeah I agree...thank you Rajat for your kind visit and words..:)

[Anjali]

Wow.... It's so cool. Loved how you started it. This is totally going on my fave shelf.👌

[Surya]

Am honoured then..Thank you Anjali..:)

[Anjali]

You're welcome!😊

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"I might be a star in your sky
But am a bond in your heart"
Loved these lines.
The last line is awesome too! Cool piece. Seems like a real punch 😉

[Surya]

Punch, may be, haha...Thank you Yumna..:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Surya. Always a pleasure 😊