Dil Ki Awaaz...

Still trying to make better in hindi/Urdu

Koun hai insaan,
Koun hai mahaan,
Dil se dekho sab me hain jaan..

Muh se nikli meethi meethi
MAA ki awaaz,
Dil me basa hua
BABU ji ki yaadein..

Rabb ke dua se
Panno me mera kaam,
Ithihas me kuch apna naam..

Dil se suno sabki awaaz
Lagta hai har ek bhala insaan..
Lootne me kya hai,
Maza to baatne me hai..

Aise hai humara zindagi,
Kabi kushi, kabi ghum,
Kabi jeet, kabi haar..
Lekin jeene ki maza kuch alag hi hai...

Author's Note

Not good at hindi, if any mistakes found, comment me with them..

Reviews

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Yeah...amazing fun and gesture in living life....zindegi mein haso jiyo muskurao...kya pta kal bhi ho😀!!
And chalo,dauro, giro, utho, udo bas rukna ni chaiye!
This poem is something amazing with hindi...great read😊

[Surya]

Knocked!!!!
Shehnai sannato me zyaada sunayi deti h......waise hi kuch h zindagi.....teek suno...maza lo....

Thank you so much for your kind visit....::)))

[¿]

Swagatam!😊

[Najam Us Saher]

Waah....nice one. I liked it.

[Surya]

Thank you Saher..am glad you liked it..:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Sorry for the delay in reading. You're welcome.

[Sikandar Khan]

Surya Nice Try.................................

[Surya]

Thank You Sikandar for your visit..keep visiting..:)

[Manasa.L]

Nicely written. I think our friends here have already pointed out the mistake so i don't have to say anything. Just keep writing and one day may be not proficiency but atleast you will be able to write in good hindi.

[Surya]

Yeah they did, hope so that I will improve my hindi, Thank you Manasa for your kind visit..:)

[Manasa.L]

You are welcome.....:)

[Bala Gorthi]

Well another write in Hindi, Surya! I just want to confirm if it is meethi meethi ( sweet sweet) or mitti mitti ( soil soil).
The message is beautiful here. Yes Jeene ka Mazda kuch Alag hai. The first section is very beautiful and touching, Surya!
Thank you for sharing..

[Surya]

Thank you Bala for letting me know that, I will correct it, and it's about sweetness...Thank you for your warm visit, am glad you enjoyed it...:)

[Bala Gorthi]

My pleasure.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Nicely written Surya..
Just one thing change that word "Bala" into "bhala" ..
And the rest of the poem is marvellous

[Surya]

Thank you Farhan for letting me know that, definitely will change, ..
Thank you for your kind visit and am glad you enjoyed..:)

[writ rajat]

Hi no mistake found but Bala insaan is cannot understand better your hindi by being my friend on fb

[Surya]

Haan, sure then, thank you for pointing out...acc. To me, bala insaan in the sense an innocent man..:)

[writ rajat]

What's your id

[Surya]

Surya Yadav or else try using [email protected], my mail id..:)