Yaadein..

How does a broken heart feel?, May be this way..

Yaad aate hai woh raat jab hum
Nadi ke kinaare pe saas lete-lete,
Pyaar ki kitaab lik rahe the,
Tab kya pata tha ki aaj 
Sirf me hi padne waala hu...

Ab tu mil bi gaya toh kya kehna
Sirf itna hi hai
"Yaadon ki samundar me tumhara 
Chehra se bara hua khazana ka khaayal rakta hu"..

Author's Note

Just a try...May be good..:) wanna make it better add your views..:)

Reviews

[Manasa.L]

Its lovely, very intense emotional lines. I wonder whose heart is broken! who so ever must have written a beautiful book.
Good to read, a pleasant and calm writing.

[Surya]

I wrote this, taking the part of a healed broken heart, like, how does he feels, that's it...Thank you Mansa ji for your visit and words...:)

[Zoya]

Aw, this is lovely! it's seldom that I read poetry in hindi/urdu...but this one caught my eye. Well written :)

[Surya]

Thank you zoe, that means to me...

[APOORVA]

beautiful emotional ride
just check your spellings at some places, rest this is a murmur to read :)
soft and intense

[Surya]

Thank you Apoorva ji....it wont repeat againn...:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Urdu poetry often touches the heart of the readers, well written man.

[Surya]

Thank you Farhan...:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This was a beautiful write, Surya. I don't usually read Urdu poetry on here but you did a nice job :) I enjoyed reading this :)

[Surya]

Even I don't coz I cant understand every word of them, it's just my heart, said to write something in urdu/hindi...I did as it ordered me...Well Thank you Yumna, am glad you enjoyed this..:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'm glad you listened to your heart's voice although it can be dangerous at times ;)
You're welcome! Always a pleasure reading your works :)

[Mr.Writer]

Woah! Nice job! I tried to use my urdu knowledge :) It was a great piece!
It's about the days we used to spent with each other :)
Keep it up! Very lovely!

[Surya]

Yup, Thank you Mr.Writer for your warm visit and words..:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

So you have an Urdu knowledge too, Mr....? Interesting ;p
#KeepingAnEyeFromNowOn ;P ;)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem!! :)

[Mr.Writer]

Lol Yumna, yes I do :D
#KeepingDoubleEyeFromNowOn :D

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Cool :P ;p

[Wajiha Nayeem]

wowieeeee!!
even i write such pieces in urdu....and i felt so happy after reading this one!
do write another one again...

[Surya]

Hope so,...and share them then...Thank you Wajiha Nayeem for your kind review and visit..:)

[Sonakshi Arora]

I am so much look forward to reading your works in Hindi! I don't get them so often. Only you and Ayush Mishra are the familiar ones. The ending was so fantastic! Keep writing!

[Surya]

I try my best dear, though hindi is not my tongue, and Thank you Sonakshi for your words and visit, keep visiting..:)

[Sonakshi Arora]

Sure :) Even though Hindi isn't your tongue, you still wrote it better than those who are fluent in it ;)

[Surya]

Ohh, Thank you for your words, haha..:)

[Sonakshi Arora]

My pleasure :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Waah....so deep and thoughtful. I truly liked it.

[Surya]

Thank you Saher for your warm words, am glad you enjoyed..:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.