Running For Lives...

Three friends started on an adventurous trip ended up with a deadly surprise..

Bullets hitting roof of yacht, Windows damaged, Kim, John and I trembling with fear.

We were out on a trip and rented a yacht and was started on waters, kim opened a bottle of Champagne saying ’Kudos friends! finally we started for it, Let’s celebrate the moment, Ohh, wow!’,  kim was terribly happy where as John was balanced as me.

 We now celebrating our party moments on waters and all of a sudden kind of war started here but exceptional case is that we don’t know our enemies and their causes, actually we never seen them.

‘Ted, who are they? , why are they onto us?’,  Kim started to shiver with these questions to me, John on the other hand  confused with fear and anxiety knowing nothing to do.

‘Ted and Kim we gonna stick to each other! and lose these people, if in case that happens so,  we just f**k off from this island to our heavenly homes, Yeah not a joke!, now I feel our homes as heaven’  John exclaimed and demanded us in his dreadful voice.

But I have no brain of mine working to escape from this suspense, I just waited for them to give us a chance to run away, I can see there are three men on the boat coming to us with guns in their hands.one of them started shouting ‘You are done with your lives babies, haha!’ again a round of bullets flyed to us after his terrible compliment to us.

We started searching for any nearby land and we found some nearby, we jumped off from Yacht, started swimming, with their warnings and firings onto us, while swimming towards nearby land there are only two questions running in my brain, 1.There might be some mistake happened around so these guys chasing us instead of others, 2. Might be we people done something terrible last night after our drinks, as we were completely blackout, I can’t remember any s**t happened last night…

I got the point that I cannot solve my stupid yet needed doubts with them as they were in no mood to chat with me, They only needed three of us to be dead, and we on the other hand running for our lives in this unknown forest.

We got onto land and started running in three different directions losing contact of each other, Kim running as a deer struggling for life from cheetah towards north, John headed east and now I can’t see him, he was deep into trees and I headed south, we had no interest in sharing Ideas to save our lives except the fact that we were in a hurry to get far away from these hunters…

I guess am deep into forest now, alone,  walking, headed to nowhere, a bit peace now but it didn’t lasted for long, I heard someone firing weapons, and I realized that I have to start a marathon again..

Reviews

[JessyJacob]

"But I have no brain of mine working to escape from this suspense, I just waited for them to give us a chance to run away, I can see there are three people on the boat coming to us with guns in their hands.one of them started shouting ‘You are done with your lives babies, haha!’ again a round of bullets flyed to us after his terrible compliment to us".

Slowly clapping, what a crazy man, I know idle man's brain is like idiot's workshop. Whose brain is absent minded?
There is no need to start a marathon again, as I am fond of and missing my sixpacks man, eating fish now.

Just kidding! Really amazing, you missed one of four idiots.

[Surya]

No I ain't, Fourth is the writer of this story, hahaha...It's Ted's mind gone blank.
Thank you Jessy for your important review, appreciated...:)

[JessyJacob]

The fourth, writer is really smart, among you all, as he was not travelling with you, and as he Knows "Yeah not a joke!, now I feel our homes as heaven’.
Crazy nomads. Nice.
No mentioning of thanks.

[Surya]

Haha, thanks for that, sorey I said it again...and my pleasure to get such a review from you...:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Wow..amazing this one is...really awesome

[Surya]

Hey Farhan, Thanks for that, am glad you enjoyed it..:)

[Mr.Writer]

Really good! Great job Surya! :) So engaging :)
It made me tense and at the edge of my seat! So good!

[Surya]

Well, it's good then, Thank you Mr.Writer for your visit and reading this piece..:)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)

[wordman]

you certainly painted beautiful images

[Surya]

Thank you Wordman...:)

[Tina H.W.]

Oh....love the ending, Surya! Tense. I could imagine everything you described in there. Actually...thinking about it, I had a dream just like your story and just like your story, it seemed so real.
A really enjoyable read with a t'riffic suspense ending. Well done! :)

[Surya]

Thank you Tina for such words and tour visit, am glad you enjoyed it..:)

[Tina H.W.]

My pleasure, Surya. You're welcome :)