Without You...
A Poem by
Surya
With You, It's true...
Without you
mirror doesn't reflect me,
There is no soul in my body,
No pen of mine can write,
No memory of mine is complete.
Every drop of rain striking me
Reminds your touch,
Each melody from waving trees
Reminds your smiling music.
Every Portrait I sketch reminds
How I miss your magical eyes,
Every tune I play reminds
Your salsa with me.
Every step of mine reminds
Your silly dreams with me,
Every smile of your's
is a treasure for me.
With you
I can breathe,
I can live,
I smile,
I dance.
© 2017 Surya
Reviews
I love your imagery. Very memorable.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank You Paper for your kind visit..And thank you for your words am glad you enjoyed..:)
The melancholy behind yet treasured memories and how they bring you to life is beautifully conveyed.
Well written :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
The melancholy behind yet treasured memories and how they bring you to life is beautifully conveyed.
Well written :)
7 Years Ago
Thank you Krutika..:)
Very beautiful.... engaging... so powerful! Omg, your poem is amazing!!
Posted 7 Years Ago
Very beautiful.... engaging... so powerful! Omg, your poem is amazing!!
7 Years Ago
Thank You Mr.Writer..:)
I have become a cynic over the tears but this broke the through the watermark and wet my heart.
Posted 7 Years Ago
I have become a cynic over the tears but this broke the through the watermark and wet my heart.
7 Years Ago
Ohh!, then it is worthy, Thank you for your words am glad you enjoyed..:)
Well, this is just downright gorgeous, beautiful, touching, heartfelt, emotional, relatable, and...did I mention gorgeous? It flows so nicely and has such a delicately serene effect on me. I really love this poem! :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
Well, this is just downright gorgeous, beautiful, touching, heartfelt, emotional, relatable, and...did I mention gorgeous? It flows so nicely and has such a delicately serene effect on me. I really love this poem! :)
7 Years Ago
Yeah you said gorgeous, and thanks for that, well a lot actually, Thank you for your visit, am glad .. read more Yeah you said gorgeous, and thanks for that, well a lot actually, Thank you for your visit, am glad you enjoyed, keep visiting..:)
7 Years Ago
Likewise Surya :) And it was my pleasure :)
nicely written... the beginning itself was awesome the rest was just a gift...thanks for sharing...keep writing.
Posted 7 Years Ago
nicely written... the beginning itself was awesome the rest was just a gift...thanks for sharing...keep writing.
7 Years Ago
Thank you for your visit, and words that means a lot...:)
' With you I can breathe, I can live, I smile, I dance. '
The emotions that make a person feel complete.
That is love, without it, the day fades..
Beautiful phrases... finely put.
Posted 7 Years Ago
' With you I can breathe, I can live, I smile, I dance. '
The emotions that make a person feel complete.
That is love, without it, the day fades..
Beautiful phrases... finely put.
7 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind review and visit..:)
Waaooww....Beautifully explained....and Surya Go ahead...I wish :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
Waaooww....Beautifully explained....and Surya Go ahead...I wish :)
7 Years Ago
Thank you Ayush, hope so, Thanks for your words and visit, keep visiting...:)
7 Years Ago
Nice, well u rlly explained it beautifully...
7 Years Ago
Thank you...:)
When someone becomes very special , in fact they become our universe, then this is how we feel about them. You have penned it very well, Surya.
We all can relate with such emotions and feelings.
Thank you for sharing..
Posted 7 Years Ago
When someone becomes very special , in fact they become our universe, then this is how we feel about them. You have penned it very well, Surya.
We all can relate with such emotions and feelings.
Thank you for sharing..
7 Years Ago
Thank you for sharing you views, am glad you enjoyed...
I can feel the emotion in each line of this beautiful poem. As well as relatable to past loves of mine. Well written. Thanks for sharing.
Posted 7 Years Ago
I can feel the emotion in each line of this beautiful poem. As well as relatable to past loves of mine. Well written. Thanks for sharing.
7 Years Ago
Haha, Thank you well am glad you enjoyed, thank you for your visit...:)
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Added on March 26, 2017
Last Updated on March 26, 2017
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Surya Hyderabad, India
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