Truth..

Why is it hidden?

Where is the truth hidden?
Behind the flawless modern beasts or
Behind the flawless emotions of
Ancient man, is it that way?.

Is it that you are hiding the bonding spirit
Made us together or you just dont need me?
Your tears say it all but you are 
A modern beast leaving this ancient man behind.

Why do you cry, when I'm sobbing here,
Is it this way you desired to see me
Or is it my hallucination seeing you cry,
Anyway am fed up with these modern pschology..

Am fed up with the society,
Am fed up with the beasts here,
Am fed up with you,
Am fed up with me.

Just a tree I deserve,
Just a smoke I love,
Just a flame burning in me,
Just me I want to be..

Reviews

[Bala Gorthi]

Wow this is beautiful!
A comparison between the crude, raw genuineness And the modern finesse, the thought behind the words all touched me, Surya. This is the best of your works I have read so far. A beautiful thought nicely executed. Well done.
Just a tree I deserve. Fed up with the beasts here. Fed up with the society. We deserve better things.
I agree with those lines.
Thanks for sharing, Surya...

[Surya]

Thank you Bala for your kind visit and appreciating, I always feel this world as circus and somehow it came out today as a poem....My next poem will be on Travelling, which makes me relieve from this world..Thanks again for your words..

[Farhan Shaikh]

That's lovely poem, I enjoyed.
I always enjoy reading your stuff Surya, looking forward to read more of your work.

[Surya]

Thank you Farhan, love you too, hahaha,..sure..

[Farhan Shaikh]

Hahaha..thank you

[Adil]

"Your tears says it all but you are
A modern beast leaving this ancient man behind."

The dilemma is beautifully described..good work.

[Surya]

Thank you Adil for your kind visit and review..

[Adil]

Your welcome..:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I want the same and safety for my children and all children.
"Just a tree I deserve,
Just a smoke I love,
Just a flame burning in me,
Just me I want to be.. "
I liked the above lines. A needed place of utopia. Thank you Surya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Haha, I need the same Utopia but without any political society neither good nor bad....Wanted freedom where we can stay in a fantasy life every individual wished..
Thank you john for your kind visit, hope you liked it..

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome my friend.