Truth..

Truth..

A Poem by Surya
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Why is it hidden?

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Where is the truth hidden?
Behind the flawless modern beasts or
Behind the flawless emotions of
Ancient man, is it that way?.

Is it that you are hiding the bonding spirit
Made us together or you just dont need me?
Your tears say it all but you are 
A modern beast leaving this ancient man behind.

Why do you cry, when I'm sobbing here,
Is it this way you desired to see me
Or is it my hallucination seeing you cry,
Anyway am fed up with these modern pschology..

Am fed up with the society,
Am fed up with the beasts here,
Am fed up with you,
Am fed up with me.

Just a tree I deserve,
Just a smoke I love,
Just a flame burning in me,
Just me I want to be..

© 2017 Surya


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we all get tired of the way things are
but we wake up and make changes

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Yeah one day we wake up and change....Thank you..:)
Wow it shows the plethora of illusion
Intelligently written and got emotion's ocean in it and going to be much better if rewritten

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Haan, I try for it...Thank you Rajat for your kind visit and words..:)
writ rajat

7 Years Ago

Ty for your words
We are what God plants inside of us but it is up to us just how much those things planted grow. Valentine

Posted 7 Years Ago


Glad I stopped by.. You have a way with a question that turns around to question self and the world... I shall be reading more of you.. write on..

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Am honoured and am glad with your words...Hope your views....
Thank you Tbear for your time r.. read more
Everyone finally comes back to those trees from which they were branched out and became a separate tree. Life at some point makes us realize that we should be what we are even when changes are inevitable. We have to keep up with the world and also be ourselves.
I loved the message your poem has conveyed. Thank u for sharing:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Thanks Manasa for your kind visit and words..
I got mixed feeling with this one. Begging for truth in romance or just mere view of reality? Anyways, this line made me think it is the former.

"Why do you cry, when I'm sobbing here,
Is it this way you desired to see me
Or is it my hallucination seeing you cry,
Anyway am fed up with these modern pschology..
"
Either way, it is wonderful Seeking for the truth is never easy.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Seeking for truth is truly never easy....your mix feeling here is true, that's what I tried to conve.. read more
CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

You're welcome.
"Just a tree I deserve,
Just a smoke I love,
Just a flame burning in me,
Just me I want to be.. "
i f*****g love this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Haha, Thank you Asmae for your kind visit and review..
Bro u have a great way to decorate your poem with such strong words containing a thousand feelings. . . very nice work :-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Thank you Pravir for visiting and appreciating, I enjoyed your view...hope the same goes...Thank you.. read more
Am fed up with the society,
Am fed up with the beasts here,
Am fed up with you,
Am fed up with me.
I liked these lines. This poem shows the true emotion one feels when they are in grief.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Thank you dear for your kind visit, I always feel that am in a circus but today it came out as a poe.. read more
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

A circus...? I didn't get you.
"Where is the truth hidden?
Behind the flawless modern beasts or
Behind the flawless emotions of
Ancient man, is it that way?. "

Nice lines here. Seeking truth can be hard sometimes.

A nice message conveyed here. Good work 👍


Posted 7 Years Ago


Surya

7 Years Ago

Thanks alot Yumna, I will correct them for sure..
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

You're welcome, Surya! A pleasure 😊

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Added on February 25, 2017
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Surya
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Hyderabad, India



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