A Bliss..

Soothing sounds of those birds,
Caring smile of your's,
Depth of the ocean
Depth of our love,
Pleasure in travelling
I get through your kiss.

My heart might measure my fist, but
It holds oceans of love for you.
'Me', is just not me, until
You are with 'Me'..
I might be a free bird, but
With a heart beating for you...

Reviews

[Bala Gorthi]

My heart might measure my fist but it holds oceans of love for you. Very beautifully crafted love !
Yes, you have rightly called it bliss, Surya. The feel, the emotions and the whole phase feel like a bliss.thank you for sharing.

[Surya]

Thank you Bala for your kind visit and your words...:)

[horizon]

It is really beautiful..I loved the line it hold of love...

[Surya]

Thank you Horizon..

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle flow of words and thoughts leading to perfect ending.
"I might be a free bird, but
With a heart beating for you..."
I like the above lines. Freedom looked less sweet when love is near. Thank you Surya for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Thank you John for your time reading and reviewing...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Heart touching poem Surya,
Really good one😊

[Surya]

Thank you Farhan for your kind visit.

[Manasa.L]

A heart touching poem well done

[Surya]

Thank you Manasa for your time reading..

[Valentine]

Catchy last few lines. Valentine

[Surya]

Thank you Kathie..:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Very heart touching poem. I loved the last lines ☺

[Surya]

Thank You Najam Us Saher for your kind visit..Visist again..

[Najam Us Saher]

Sure I will :)