A Bliss..

Soothing sounds of those birds,
Caring smile of your's,
Depth of the ocean
Depth of our love,
Pleasure in travelling
I get through your kiss.

My heart might measure my fist, but
It holds oceans of love for you.
'Me', is just not me, until
You are with 'Me'..
I might be a free bird, but
With a heart beating for you...

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

My heart might measure my hand! Wonderful alliteration and assonance (Heart/hand ... is that assonance? )r is it something else?). whatever, ! it sounds good!

[Surya]

Haha, it's not hand, it's fist..as science says heart measures size of our own fist..I tried that measurement here...
Thanks a lot for your visits appreciating them, enjoying them....:)

[Great Aunt Astri]

Isn't that strange, Surya? I could swear I read 'fist' as 'hand'! I must have been SO transported away!

[Surya]

Haha..!!..no issues re read it again..:)

[Great Aunt Astri]

Ah, yes, I see what you mean. Oceans are far bigger than hands! (sorry< I mean FISTS.) I don't know why, Surya, but I seem to prefer 'hands'. It may be because, in England the word fist has connotations. 'Fistycuffs' is a slang word for 'fighting'!!!

[Surya]

Ohh..Thank you for letting me know it..:)

[Great Aunt Astri]

Please Senru, lookup the poem you inspired me to write.

[Khushi Madan]

wow... i honestly loved it...specially the lines "i might be a free bird, but with a heart beating for you..."loved it...

[Surya]

Thank you Kushi for your kind visit, am glad you enjoyed it, keep visiting...:)

[Paul]

Beautifully written, In a tale of love. Well done! Thanks for sharing!

[Surya]

Am glad you enjoyed, Thank you for your kind visit, keep visiting..:)

[wordman]

sweet words of love,my heart feels oceans of yurt love

[Surya]

Haha, Thank you for your visit, am glad you enjoyed..:)

[Giulia King]

So romantic! I feel like this is a letter that people sent to their loved ones decades ago

[Surya]

May be, Thank you for your kind visit, am glad you enjoyed..:)

[writ rajat]

Very nice bro bro bro very nice bro bro bro word limit

[Surya]

Haha, no worries, well Thank you for your visit..:)

[Aravindwrites]

Depth of the ocean,
depth of our love...simple it is but conveys a lot...

[Surya]

Thank u Aravind for your kind visit..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"I might be a free bird, but
With a heart beating for you..."

Some people just know how to cage free birds with their love..
A good write which I enjoyed despite its dreamy quality..😊

[Surya]

Thank you Yumna for your kind visit and words..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're most welcome 😊

[Adil]

"My heart might measure my fist, but
It holds oceans of love for you."
Beautifully portrayed,,,thanks for sharing..:)

[Surya]

Thank You Adil for your kind visit and your review here...:)

[Adil]

My Pleasure..:)

[CAPOLAVORO]

Wow! so in love with this one. :) You are good in making people's heart melt.

[Surya]

Thank you, haha might be...