Freedom.

Freedom.

A Poem by Surya

Please, let me fly,
Let me free,
Let me dream,
Don't stop me,
Let my wings free.

I want to travel,
I want to meet people,
I want to die for me in me,
Please let me try.

But I want you as
Wind beneath my wings,
I want you as a force to push me,
I want you to be a dream
On which I won't give up.

I want you to be a sweet memory for me,
Not as a ruler to make my rules.

© 2017 Surya


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As wonderful as you are my dear !!!!!!
I remember this.........
All the lines depict some sort of emotions and I like that..
Each word has got its own meaning and refreshments which add to the flavour........
great write mister!!!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

tears.......dnt say that u let few tears flow....coz nothing I wrote that was so emotional here....
Surya

7 Years Ago

not abt yours but if one shares some words wbt my write usually i get emotional.
Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

oh!!!!!!!!! Mr emotional... i thought only I was emotional....

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Hyderabad, India



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