Character

Character

A Story by Raylene
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Okay I am thinking of creating one of these characters for law of the Dragons my book that is published right now I need however a help deciding who to put in and where

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Daisy or Phoebe crow (still working on the name) : She is the daughter of the shapeshifter tribe of Cleveria she is kind of a rebel. She hates being the kings only child as her mother died during childbirth and shapeshifter only mate once; she is usually seen followed by her nanny as she is only seven yet she likes to have adventures in the wilderness as she is found by one of King Nicholases knights who capture her in bird form as a pet for the Princes second birthday .

Goose : a knight of the kings guard he is a new recruits brought in from the Isles yet he is very cheerful for a knight and is very immature even though he is known as the deadliest fighter among the land. He save Aine during a fire of the village yet he placed her in his barracks under his protection as she reminds him of his sister Rachel

Hesperia Elm : a prostitute who works out of the village of Rostrum who takes in most of the orphanage children she is a witch which is how she can maintain her health she also helps in saving Winifred from the snow as well as thomas

Pocan Cyrus : A care free traveler who is a fawn he helps in order to show Queen Rohesia the way of the Faye if she does not want her kingdom burned and how to learn about the real way of how Faye love need ideas for his Nick name (got Po and Pocie

© 2016 Raylene


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Of all these Hesperia sticks out to me. However, that is just me. All of them are really cool characters she just sticks out the most to me.

Phoebe is a really cool name. I used it for one of my characters in Demons & Angels.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wølfy

7 Years Ago

Top Gun is pretty big you know. If people do not know Top Gun then they are way too young xD Ah okay.. read more
Raylene

7 Years Ago

Yah thanks wolf I needed some feed back
Wølfy

7 Years Ago

I will try my best to give feedback when I can.

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Raylene
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