Courting

Courting

A Poem by Raylene

Courting is a delicate thing.
A girl may like the boy.
A boy may like a girl.

The two begin a fragile dance.
They must however build the floor they dance on.
They must learn each others moves.
They must two become one.

Yet in this courting.
Love may blossom.
Or one of the dancers break their foot.

Either may haplen.
That is the beautiful thing.
Courting the results are never known.

© 2016 Raylene


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building the floor from scratch and learning each other's moves...that makes it a two way dance...and love survives not unless that happens..i really like this analogy...and i remember when i was young and courting was actually something we did...today is different---

j.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Raylene

7 Years Ago

Yes thank you I've read about courting and heard of it as we l so I wrote this in its honor
Yet in this courting.
Love may blossom.
Or one of the dancers break their foot.

-i like this part :-)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Raylene

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much
CeeJei

8 Years Ago

:-) your welcome...

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Raylene
Raylene

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