The writer and the poser

The writer and the poser

A Poem by Raylene

The writer :
Sees the world in a unique way it flows to them.
They are cursed and gifted with a mind full of imagination.
They write for the pleasure and release from the toxic world around them.
They see people as unique individuals, who influence them.
They are usually unnoticed but the loudest in their mind.

The Power:
They see writing not as a way of life but to feed the bloated media.
They steal from the writers for they do not have the passion to write even a letter.
The poser makes them selves noticed.
They are the loudest but have no thoughts of their own.

The writer sees the power and vise versa
The poser has money to spare while the writer spent their last few dollars for a new note book.
These two are forever entwined
Yet it is up to the reader
To decide
To follow the love and true enchanted way of a writer
Or the mask of a generic poser.

© 2016 Raylene


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A good writer take the reader to better place and thoughts.
"Yet it is up to the reader
To decide
To follow the love and true enchanted way of a writer
Or the mask of a generic poser."
Writing must be tempting and have a proper title. Good title bring the reader to new work. I enjoyed your thoughts on my favorite topic.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Raylene

8 Years Ago

Thank you yet why are you reviewing my work so much
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I have enjoyed your work. After reading one of your pieces. I had to read more.
Raylene

8 Years Ago

Oh (blushes) thank you that means a lot to me
Wow. This is intense. Just one tip real quick: I think that "poser" may have autocorrected to "power" a few times throughout the poem, which is a bit confusing. You might want to go back and fix those! :) The ideas in this poem are expressed quite vehemently, making it interesting to read. I really like the stanza describing the writer, as it does so in a unique and, at the same time relatable, way. The fact that the writer and the poser "are forever intertwined" is also interesting, and somewhat frightening. It seems as if there is a lot of intense emotion behind this piece. Nice work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Raylene

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear
your thoughts have been expressed wonderfully in this poem! i loved it!! keep writing :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Raylene

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear
The two will always be entwined. One needs the other but for different reasons.
Nicely expressed thoughts.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Raylene

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear
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Gee
Just as well we all write for the love of it as none of us will make a cent eh. Enjoyed your musings.


Posted 8 Years Ago


Raylene

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear
Candid musing, filled with authentic reality. Indeed true that the writen word culminates in a readers interpretation and perception.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Raylene

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much I do not do a lot of poetry so I am honored by any review I get on my poems since .. read more
love the contrasts you bring up...what comes from the heart as opposed to what comes looking for the pocket book.
in second stanza, should it be "The Poser" in the first line?

i read it as so.

but the parallels done so well...

there is writing because we have to, it is innate...or there is writing because of how we can use it to our advantage...

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Raylene

8 Years Ago

Yes it was an accident but thank you you are right in your point this poem came to me because I rea.. read more
so much truth to your words

Posted 8 Years Ago


Raylene

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much .
very unique poem and well planned
i love it ..
thanks for sharing such a lovely piece of work

Posted 8 Years Ago


Raylene

8 Years Ago

Thank you i don't write poems much so this means a lot to me
Umhhhhhhhhhhhhhhnh...

I don't really agree with this.
Far too inclusive.
I don't think all of the silent, unnoticed types necesserily have more imagination then people who are louder and 'Posers'. And just because someone is outspoken does not mean he had copied all of his ideas or anything of that sort.

You obviously feel strongly about this topic,
But I've met some very creative people who were sometimes shy and confined and sometimes very loud and audible. Yet it didn't change anything.

But that's just my opinion!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Raylene

8 Years Ago

my dear what I meant by this the writer does not care if he or she goes unnoticed and most writers I.. read more
LastMonth

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the patient and understanding response. Appreciate your maturity.
Raylene

8 Years Ago

Maybe you would like other writings my poems are very deep and I have only wrote two on here since I.. read more

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