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for anyone who has ever said Can We Still Be Friends? after breaking someone elses heart.

A Friendship I thought i Lost.

 

i was cold and hurting

lost out in the night
wandering and searching
for heaven's light

I saw the night sky clearing
when you spread your rainbow wings
But little did I know
what joy you would bring

From that moment on
a friendship did start
you kissed away my tears
and sheltered my heart

I bless the day God
sent him from above
But then I grew fearful
for I had fallen in love

I told you this feeling
and what did you say?
You said you liked our friendship
and that's how it would stay

I cried for a friendship I thought I lost
But then felt your warm, gentle hand
You then whispered in my ear
that by my side you'll forever stand

 

Reviews

[Surrealstorm]

I really like this, it has good flow and the emotions show through clearly and strong. Keep writing because this is really good work.

[Joy C]

It's really touching. I like the last line: by my side you'll forever stand. It's what kept us living on, right? The flow of this piece is great.

[Wolfwind Words]

A wonderful work, showing the true dedication of friendship.
Well writen, full of emotion and expression. Great Write!

infinity's Shadow