Broken

Characters Sandra Dad Jake Narrotor 1 Adoption centr leader

(dad on couch...)

Sandra walks up to dad."dad, can I eat?"

Dad gets up."later"

Sandra:but I am hungry

Dad:no!dad gets glass bottle and smashes it in Sandra's face

Sandra crys:but daddy!

Dad hits Sandra, and kick and punch.

Sandra runs away into jakes arms crying.

Jake:what happened!

Sandra:dad! We got to run away!

Jake:no, we can't...we just leave it...it gets better.

Sandra: It won't ...

Jake:yes it will, lets go and help eachother make a sandwich.

Sandra:thanx!

Narrotor1: one year later, the 2 16 year olds finaly got enough of there father...

Sandra:help! HELP ME!

Dad punches sandra, hits her and gets a knife a pulls it up her bloody face.

Jake comes and stabs dad.

Sandra runs up to jake,and hugs him

Sandra:thank you

Narrator 1: they was split in adoption,never saw eachother again

Sandra:I miss you jake...

Jake:I miss you sandra...

Narrator1: after one year they went to the same train station were they left eachother.

Sandra:huh....why did jake have to leave.

Sandra and jake sees eachother, they both smile.

Sandra:JAKE!

Jake:Sandra-ahhh!

Sandra jumps on jake and hugs tight.

Author's Note

Ignore any mispelling

Reviews

[Sabrina Marie]

Personally, if this had more time put into it or more expression and/or reasoning, it'd be way better.