Ocean Water

Ocean Water

A Poem by Raven Dodson
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Enjambment Poem

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The ocean so blue my 
face reflects on the 
crystal clear water, 
the sea creatures look 
at me from below 
as if saying, ¨Why 
are you in my land.¨ 

Poems are big, like 
all the oceans in one 
there is no length 
there is no end at all.

God has created 
this masterpiece of 
beauty which has 
created the world 
today and will be. 

Seashells in very 
shapes, sizes, colors 
which are both so unique 
and so different 

You see the water 
Turning and twisting 
Crashing against the 
sand leaving and taking 
shells, seaweed, and other 
than that you see people 
laughing and having 
a great time with friends 
pets and family. 

© 2014 Raven Dodson


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this is very beautiful hun, to me, it kind of expresses the beauty in God's creation. it's like a reminder that even though this world is harsh and cold, there is some good still left in it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Seashells in very
shapes, sizes, colors
which are both so unique
and so different
---
Seashells in varied
shapes, sizes, colors
which are both so unique
and so different
---
I think that's the word you wanted here...
the scenery and descriptions fan out in this...

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Raven Dodson
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I am a very passionate person who loves to be around people making me extremely outgoing. I express my feelings through writing, art, and photography. I am here just to write and appreciate comments, .. more..

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