Love At First Sight!

This HEART cry your name, and never forget the same!!

Summer Rains and Winter Heat

You are the reason I Breathe..

You are the Song in the car..

I keep singing , so far…

 

Your hands are tied,

Entangled in mine…

Streets are cold, we walk and walk

And talk these talks and talk some more….

 

You have Everything,

I cannot live without…

You are the dying man’s last words,

I cannot smile without!

 

In your arms i forget to Woe..

On your lap my Lids get close….

And your uptight Stare,

Ahh! I can see through my Hair..:)

 

You are broken Heart’s band-aid..

I am your Moth drawn to the flame…

You are my Line of Sight..

You are my LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT!! J

Reviews

[Vani Jalagar]

Love at first sight :) I fell in love with your writing...it is splendid :)

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a lively passion that flows in the emotions, the words, the colors... all have such a vibrance of life that love alone can bring!

[zainul]

Romantic and passionate piece.
Read and thought how loving one's thoughts might be expressed.

[Deepankar]

Very Nice and written with all heart.

[Chiradeep Patra]

Beautifying an article or poem is an art itself, only a true artist can do that. And you are a true artist. Very well written poem with proper formatting and decoration.

Keep entertaining...

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

definately...
thanku so much for stopping by! :)

[Gaurav Walia]

A very cute poem... Kudos!

[JulieÉmile]

Very beautiful. Really enjoyed it. Nice sentence construction and rhyme scheme. Takes me into all together a different world. Thank you for sharing this

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

There are some lovely ideas in this one, and some very original images "you are a broken heart's band-aid" and "I am your moth drawn to the flame"--both really great lines. Overall, I think if you pumped up the word choice a little more and some of the phrasing, this would be stellar. Overall, nicely done.

[AdorableDreams]

Awhhh so lovely! It is sweet. Good job.

[beyondpen]

lovely expression of love at first sight adorned with the innocence of a first love/ infatuation... keep up the good work :)