rose, ohh!..it blows me off..

beautiful comparison between rose and girl..

Alluring and Enthralling beauty
reminds me of your glory!
redden as rouge
flush me, suffuse!
rose, ohh! it blows me off..

Delicate and dazzling petals
just like your skin, soften
people call it a symbol of 'love'
but for me, a symbol of 'you'
ohh this rose, drags me to you....!!

Rain drops on your face
just like dew drops in pace
on petals, going to stake
right through my heart, and attack
ohh this rose, really blows me off!!

Petals falling in breeze
just like your hair, ohh it made me freeze
exquisite and mesmeric
you are just ravishing
ohh this rose...

TO every rose, I smell
reminds me of your perfume, again and again
Its my pain, how can I explain
girl, am going through hell
because it's rose, which blows me off!!

Whenever I bring it you
my heart, smash into you
and when you react, ohh dear
I only wish..."could i have this kiss FOREVER"??

Reviews

[Divya Punjabi]

lovely poem!! hats off! :)

[Introspective Mind]

nice read, indeed.....with all romantic flavor....."but for me, a symbol of 'you'....".....I love this line...

[Jack...]

There is something about that one special kiss, that we all hope will never end. Very nice.

[Hiral]

oweee cute and romantic...Great going

[Ency Bearis]

A good concept, well written.

[Shivam Murari]

Lost in love. Seems a pure emotion of a 'Hopeless Romantic', are you? :)

Good read :)

[Mike Emil]

HAI!!!
women and roses both have thorns!!!

[Shivam Murari]

ha! how didn't I notice that? :D

[Souladareatease]

A sweet write, the rose is always worth time and feeds the muse of life, Beautiful imagery!!!

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

Thank you so much..i am humbled :)