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A Poem by Audrey Wynters

Why do these souls fade away?
Dissipating like vapor in to a ghostly wind.
Rising up to places we can not reach,
Their view from the stars must be a beautiful one.

© 2015 Audrey Wynters

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CA Anurag Sharma

it takes a moment for the soul to fade away... soon our trace is erased....no one actually knows where does this soul go..... good one

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Thank you, you captured the essence of the poem beautifully.

Lizardo

Another great poem. I do love the last line.
Wonderful poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Thank you, I appreciate the feedback very much.

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Added on January 3, 2015
Last Updated on January 3, 2015
Tags: poetry, short

Author

Audrey Wynters

Ottawa, Canada

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I love to read and write and have been actively doing both since I was a little girl. I dream of the day I might see my writing in print so I can turn to someone and say "I wrote that". I love the.. more..