Timeless time

“Time flies over us but leaves its shadow behind” – Nathaniel Hathrowne

Will not stand by and wait for you
not restless, not patient, not vibrant
comes unwelcomed, leaves unannounced
once lost, never to be found again…

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[Ashwin Shanker]

Great way to describe time. It is ever-present. But we humans have measured it to the micro-second; which I feel have only added to our peril as no other species in nature is keeping a track of time.
is time a blessing or a frankenstein? Only time will tell. :P

[Ashwin Shanker]

It is short, accurate and elegant.
Makes us more aware of the moments that pass... Which reminds me.... :P

[Surabhi Kaushik]

Thanks so much

[Karmee]

It's a really good write, enjoyed

[Faith2993]

I'm in love with the title :) I really like how insightful this poem is. Again good job!

[Surabhi Kaushik]

Thanks a lot.

[PenguinEmpiress]

I really like it! It's simple and short but written well! Wel done!

[Surabhi Kaushik]

Thanks a lot