I Love You

If I had a day, an hour

I'd want you by my side

If i had just a breath left

I'd want you by my side

If its nothing but a stupid dream

I'd want you in my arms

If its nothing but just a glimpse

I'd want you in my arms

If you are the sky, I'd

Stretch till the horizon

If you are the sea, I'd 

Circle you as your shore

If you be a bird, I'd 

Be the wind whence you glide

If you be a kite, I'd 

Be the string to hold your flight

If you would have me tonight 

I'd hold you at my side

If you would stay beside

I'd be the happiest man alive 

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

awwwww, this is so sweet and romantic.. look at you trying to get those butterflies, my friend.. the ending made my heart melt.. that last stanza brought it home nicely!.. I love the examples scattered throughout.. helped reinforce the lengths that the speaker would go to, the depth at which they feel.. very nice!

[Sunya]

hehe butterflies butterflies :p
I'm glad you liked it :)
Thankyou April

[Saddam]

Lovely piece. I LOVE IT TOO....

[Duckey]

Loved it! it's such a cute and romantic poem, and really is very emotional :) Very well written!

[Sunya]

Thankyou :) I am glad you enjoyed it