The way home

after much to-and-fro's and yes-and-no's,
there comes the time to go home,
i rest upon myself, again,
and forget all that i tried to know,

the music keeps playing,
I'm on and off, 
but tonight I'm listening,
and i don't wanna stop.

a lot has changed, and rearranged,
but something still remains the same,
I'm loosing myself, again,
and quite rejoicing this estrange,

the mind-bird is flying,
I'm up and down,
but today I'm not trying,
to chase it around.

the music keeps playing,
I'm on and off, 
but tonight I'm listening,
and i don't wanna stop.

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

the melody within this journey is so pleasant... I really enjoyed this one.. there are a few lines in here that I really liked.. the use of repetition here really drives your point home and was well done.. thank you for sharing this one with me... sometimes we just have to let go and listen to the ways of the wind that want to blow us where they wish... the winds of change can be daunting, but they can be enchanting and lead us to exactly where we need to be.. we all long to have that "home" to which is our refuge and comfort... sometimes amongst our travels we get lost and cannot find our way, it is then that we can let go and listen to what our heart is trying to tell us.. sometimes it knows more than we do.. sometimes those voices in our head try to sway us the wrong way... well done my friend..

[Sunya]

Gosh April thats such a beautiful review :) polite and nice like you said :p hehe
thankyou so much for this amazin review :) i agree with your words, those voices in our heads are a disaster if listened to
i am glad you enjoyed it :)