Solemn Wishes

just a little bit of eyes to see inside could grow us,

like a seed in the soil that has started to grow its roots,

in the middle of the life we come to a point where we find,

that nothing is new and nothing is ready to stay the same,

from where we come and to where we go and where we are,

is as difficult to understand as it is to know it,

and life moves in the invisible path of time and space,

and we create all our reality based on experiences....

the wall to break and the wall to climb,

are changing faces time to time,

unreal bridges, connecting different cities,

break and we fall everytime,,,,

and wish is, to need not wish again,

and this is the wish that remains forever,

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

I really enjoy the way in which you write.. it feels so comfortable, like you are just speaking to me in the most pleasant way, telling me a story, teaching me a lesson, sharing a glimpse into your mind, soul, and heart....

one suggestion, if I can...

"from where we come and to where we go and where we are,"..... think it would sound better to take out the middle "and".... (from where we come, to where we go, and where we are)

another lovely write, my friend... ahhh to wish to not have to wish again.. magic... I wish..lol

[Sunya]

thankyou for the suggestion :) it does sound better :) i am glad you liked it..yours words are so kind and polite :) thankyou
wish to need not wish again :D you wish? ;)

[AprilRN1210]

cute...... :P