Let Go

The fall was harder than ever.
The hit was like bare ice.
I felt it coming a week ago.
Yet I let it happen despite.

My foundation is falling.
Quickly from benieth me.
I'm weak and very unstable.
All I wanted was to be.

I've become oblivion.
To those who once knew.
I never tried to be like you.
Although Badly I wanted to.

Persuasive is my alter ego.
Let go, she says let go.
Be one with death.
Just let go honey. Let go.

Author's Note

When life becomes too great a tole to bare we tend to slip out of the habbit of curriosity. The thought of death wins. Fight we try but eventually lose.. so pursuasive she is...

Reviews

[Joseph - Michael]

This is some exellence descriptions of having "mental breakdown" but there are much more to that as in "things will get even more worse better it can get any better"

Other than that, it may be short and quick, but it's all still good tho...

[Thomas B. Buckman]

Very good imagry. A little choppy in the first four lines, but the flow evens up after that. I likey, ver much.