The Darker Side of It All

This romance so dark,
Feeling more the less demented,
Tortured in such a way,
I'm above you while you're sleeping.

Your breathing so content,
I twist the edges of the pillow.
Sometimes I want to kill you,
Because I love you too much.

I've never been so infuriated,
Yet I am contemplating the thought.
I get the feeling I am afraid.
But the thoughts come on so strong.

The voices say it will be fine,
Oh so still, Oh so f*****g still you lay.
I put the pillow back under my head,
The feeling has gone away.

Another night another night,
It will come to me all over again.
I will fight the feelings and let it die.
I wont kill you baby I love you.

Author's Note

Enjoy =)

Reviews

[Psyche]

Wow! I had to make sure I hadn't reviewed this one yet, because I was drawn to the one called sick again, you're work has that effect on me, drawing me again to ones that have already drawn me before. You're work is so dark, I love it!! It makes me want to write the way I used to. The way that I had when I was twisted before I worked my demons out and tried to be normal. HAH! Like that was ever a possibility for people such as us! LOL It makes me laugh to even pose the ideal for someone such as you. Normal...you have a great ability to write the sick into such clarity of everyday. I love how you make it SEEM so normal. Taylor H is right, it even gives me the creeps. And it spurs me onto wanting to write. I have so many ideas now... Okay enough accolades, I must go write...look to me having you go read my s**t now! lol...Great job!! LOVED IT!!!

[EpicKizzy]

this one is very hmm idk how to word it.. its good tho dont get me wrong:) when i think of a way to word it ill let you know♥

[JadedSparrow]

This was so wonderfully twisted that I had to read it again. Some beautiful images accompanied the emotions this poem sparked inside of me. Perhaps because I have been in this place that you so flawlessly described. Bravo. A most enjoyable read.

JS

[Lee E. Powell]

Absolutely Awesome! I love this, extreme and creepy.
"I wont kill you baby I love you."

[Taylor H]

this is creepy as f**k lol. and like legion says im not sleeping over your house lol

[Legion]

I'm not sleeping over that is for sure. :) I like it. Tortured thoughts and the fight to control them. Kudos.