Again

Pathetic? Seems to be all I am lately.

Lost? Inside my apethetic thoughts.

Mourning? Your careless way out.

Afraid? Very much so to fail.

 

Losing, is all we've done.

Care, we couldn't enough.

Love, continuously over rated.

You, are just like me in so many ways.

 

I couldn't bare to watch this fall.

I can't live to see another go down.

I won't be the blame for your ignorance.

You won't live to see me change.

 

I laughed when you fell. I'm guilty.

You doubted my trying to be better,

Neither of us fessed up.

That was expected from the beginning.

 

Fate has the last laugh.

We get what we deserve.

I decided to do what I did.

I was too self centered to pick up the pieces.

 

 

Reviews

[Rachel DeHart]

This is amazing. And I know these feelings all so very well.
I love these lines
"I laughed when you fell. I'm guilty.
You doubted my trying to be better,
Neither of us fessed up.
That was expected from the begining."

And this line alone gives me goose bumps!
"I was too self centered to pick up the peices."

And just me being nit picky...
begining is spelled beginning
and peices is spelled pieces

But I definitely know how you can just type and words spill out completely ignoring grammar.

Again, you're amazing!!!!

[siri]

again your style never grows week this piece holds tons of emotion but you protray it with ur unique addicting way....hmmm what more can say i f****n loved it!