Sweetest Failure

Sweetest Failure

A Poem by Sunshine Kid

 

She was
His sweetest
Failure
That feeling
So pure
Too pure
Clear
Cleansing
Smooth as ice
And just       
As fragile                              
Anyone
Can break it             
And did
Someone
(Not them)
Shattered it
With just one
Movement
Everything fell
She was gone
Before
He could rebuild
The shattered
Ice.
She was
His sweetest
Failure.

© 2008 Sunshine Kid


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe
Flag Flag Writing


Stats

76 Views
Added on February 16, 2008

Author

Sunshine Kid
Sunshine Kid

About
Intro: Hello, all! My name is... well, you can call me Sunshine Kid or just plain Sunshine. Whichever you are more comfortable with. =) My Writing: I enjoy writing more than I enjoy breathing. Actual.. more..

Writing
[more writing]