Caring

Caring

A Poem by Sunshine Kid

 

Caring
It’s…
God
It’s like
Giving a dog
A treat
He loves you
He’s happy
But everyone around you
Scolds you
Always
Everytime
“But…”
“No buts!
What have
I told
You?”
“I’m sorry”
“You should be”
Then the dog
So confused
Still happy
Begs for more
But you gently
Refuse him
And he
(Being the
Dog he
Is)
Becomes
Confused
He does well
He tries
He rolls over
But no treats
For him
Until the girl
Forgets about
The scolding
And gives him
The loving
Treat
(As we know
Now is called
Care)
But then
Then
She is scolded
Oh
The cycle…

© 2008 Sunshine Kid


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