Take it all away, To this place. The place where I belong.

Take it all away, To this place. The place where I belong.

A Poem by SunshineKim
"

Only in poetry.

"

Take me away to the a place where the skies touch ground,
where there's nothing to fear, but fear itself.
Take me away to the sunset over the ocean
where you can sit and think for hours on end.

Take me away to the place where you're at
so I too can see what you're seeing.
Take me too the place where the sea seems never ending,
no land for miles, just you and I.

My eyes ache for adventure, and my feet wanna move!
I'll take you to where I go to think,
maybe than you too could create something true.

I'll show you my world, and yours upside down,
I'll take you to a place where down is up, and up
is down.

Lets go there now, to think to write to feel.
I'll jump if you jump, lets go my dear.

© 2009 SunshineKim


Author's Note

SunshineKim
ignore all bad grammar, and spelling. It's the meaning I want to jump out at you.

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It's the place we all see in our daydreams, the mind's paradise landscape.

Fantastic piece! The wonderful display of the anxiousness that comes along with wishing for adventure with someone in a place you both belong was amazing.

The imagery was wonderfully done. "where the skies touch ground...where the sea seems never ending."

:D

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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It's the place we all see in our daydreams, the mind's paradise landscape.

Fantastic piece! The wonderful display of the anxiousness that comes along with wishing for adventure with someone in a place you both belong was amazing.

The imagery was wonderfully done. "where the skies touch ground...where the sea seems never ending."

:D

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The meaning jumped out at me.

When you're going to this place, please take me with you cause it sounds wonderful.

Beautiful....

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 12, 2009

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SunshineKim
SunshineKim

Akron, PA



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My name is kimberlee, but ever since I was tiny I've been called Sunshine. I'm here to find myself getting credit for what I feel deserves it. I just want a little help along the lines. more..

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